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WTF?
Fluttershy!! How could you?!?!? LOVE HER!!!!! ....If you don't mind.
I hope everything turns out okay, though, and I do mean everything.
So you're off to a good start, even if it is a bit rushed here and there.
I'll follow this along and see how it goes.
967197 I find that's my biggest problem. I try to expand but eh....
Damn it! every time there's the phrase Broken Rainbow or some variation of it Rainbow always gets raped! *sigh* Looks like this might be interesting though so let's see where this goes.
968316 I honestly didn't want to use Broken Rainbow in the title, just because of how overused it is, but it just fits best so I caved in.
968949
Meh no big deal. I just get twisted at certain things.
This is off to a gripping start. I can see Fluttershy feeling guilty being unable to return somepony's affection. Poor Rainbow. She gets rejected by Fluttershy, though kindly, and then this happens to her. I only hope Fluttershy can help her. Also, I hope whoever did this gets hurt, a lot.
969571 We'll see. Planning on chapter 2 being up later today.
970827
I look forward to reading it.
So Fluttershy seems to have a new resolve, and hey, how determined she is to be by her side and see her. oh yes, this definitely does speak a lot about how she's feeling, and how much Rainbow means to her.
Aww! Cute ending! X3 She calls her Dashie and Rainbow wakes up! Kind of like she was roused thanks to her.
972260 Thank you. Means a lot.
972512 You're welcome!
Okay now I am going to follow where this goes. The story is looking a little more promising now
Another story with RD in hospital... hmmmm. Well at least you write a gripping, slightly mortfying read that makes me want to keep reading.
I like the ending though. It cute and sugests Fluttershy's feelings might be changing. She can get Dash through it.
Keep up the good work and I'll be sure to change my negitive rating (I gave it after the first chapter) to a thumbs up!
FTW!
972679 Oh I see how it is. As Gilda would say, "You are such a flip flop!" Nah, I'm happy I was able to change your mind.
972719 Naaaa... I simpily didn't take kindly to the shock at the end of the first chapter.
hence my comment I left, not knowing what else to say.
But the fact that one chapter later I am feeling that I am likley to change my mind about this fic says something good about this.
As I hope you can tell from my profile pic, I normaly like the cuter stuff between these two the most but I like to give all Flutterdash content at least a chance.
FTW!
972751 As do I. Flutterdash is my favorite as well and I am planning on some cute moments, but I wanted the fic to be more grounded. I wanted something more than feels and fluff. I don't know how well it will work out, but eh.....we'll see.
For a second there i thot it was gonna go cupcakes on me
974547 Nonononono. I enjoyed Cupcakes for what it was and respect the fame its garnered, but I would never write a Cupcakes-ish story.
Well, I guess her wings weren't broken for once... then again, I'm not sure if this is an improvement... Still. I'll track it.
977626
Awwwww...
Cute and eyewatering. Rather sad. I'm sure Fluttershy can help Dashie...
Keep up the good work I look foward to more.
Awww, but her dream was so sweet.
I guess to give something nice and cute amidst all the sadness. 
Yes! Rainbow would make a good marefriend! I think Fluttershy's slowly coming around to seeing it! Hope so, anyway! 
979712 She is certainly gonna try.
979992 Sometimes I think Fluttershy is too innocent for her own good.
980015 That's true, sometimes she can be!
980121 But I wouldn't have her any other way.
980216 Neither would I!
Looks like Fluttershy is coming around. She'll be there for Rainbow, but I have to say that you did a really good job at the end. I just felt awful for Rainbow.
993652 Thank you for saying so. I've got major plans for them.
It's picking up steam
The Flutterdash train has almost left the station. It would be funny if they snuggle in front of thier friends in the next chapter and everypony else leaves the two alone for some development time. I'm likeing the sound of "Major plans" 
Keep up the great work.
You have just gained a thumbs up from the Flutterdash7
995457 Yay! One more step toward my life being complete.
Oh I think I like where this is going. The chapters continue to improve. Voice acting 'Shy and Dashies parts were a lot of fun here. I could realy feel the change in tone when shy talked to Shining Armour. Thats the scary side not normaly shown
FTW!
Your clifhanger is pretty sweet.
Fluttershy isn't about to abandon Rainbow in her time of need. Part of me is hoping that Flutters is there when they get the monster that did this.
1006392 We all know Fluttershy can rage like a minotaur
1007509 I don't yet. It might happen.
Nice little filler... Next up some Flutterdash cuddle time please
It does add some rain clouds on the horizon though. Things have potental to get messy.
1014713 There are definitely some feels coming.
THIS STORY NEEDS MORE VIEWS!
MOAR!
JK take your time. 
You have earned my favorite!
1022158 Next chapter is going up sometime tomorrow. So I have decreed it, and so shall it be done
And thanks for the fave. They need a "brohoof" emoticon. In lieu of that, have a 
Ah, abortion makes its entry into the stories of Equestria.
Oh my gosh........................ I don't know what to say. Happy yet sad chapter. IT'S GREAT!
So moving and touching............ but I got a slap in the face. I am curious to see who is guilty.
1025398 I honestly don't know if I'm gonna go that route. Still mulling it over.
1025613 That's like exactly what I was going for. Glad you enjoyed it.
Wow that went from amazing and happy then you drove a stake through that and now I'm rooted to the spot wanting to know if I should table filp or keep going. The tension is crazy. I hope they can 'fix' the rainbow so that she doesn't need to carry that unwanted foal.
Keep going! Please! Just keep making it as epic as this chapter is and this story will be gold.
1025731 I hope you haven't written yourself into a corner. I never would've introduced this twist, because once it is introduced, it's difficult to avoid the (sigh) controversy regarding abortion while still doing it adequate justice. I mean, there are ways around it, but unless a discussion of post-rape abortion and its various cousins is what you intended, I think the story might be better off without it. That being said, you have introduced it, so I'm hoping you'll exceed my expectations of what might happen next. (Also keep in mind that the other reason I wouldn't have written this into a story is because I don't write stories.
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OMG Flutterdash image at the top!
1026137 I love contrast like that.
1026319 I'm not in a corner. I have several ideas for how to move forward and how I want to tie it in with the over-arc. Just a matter of decision really.
1026380 I just noticed that. My heart exploded. Twice.
1026415 oh my god lovley cliffhanger i hate you making me wait just kidding really looking forward to the next chapter full of emotions
1027262 You're welcome. *takes bow*
It didn't occur to them that Fluttershy could still carry thier filly?
Ahhhh well...
This certanly is still a brutal story and you have continued to keep it that way. I can't say I like or enjoy it but I will continue reading as you have truly have snared this Flutterdash fan and I'm in for the ride, providing you don't get my two faveroute ponies completly screwed.
I wonder... is that a light I see? Might things finaly start to turn around for this cute couple?
Keep up the good work. I like a good gripping tail and I think this is one, as much as I despise what poor Dashie is being put through.