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Twilight Sparkle is worried that Princess Celestia's power is fading because of her defeat at the hooves of Queen Chrysalis. She pays a visit to Cadence about the origins of the alicorns in hopes of finding a way to restore Celestia's power. The story goes much deeper than she ever thought and the knowledge may carry dire consequences.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 24 )

I'm loving this story. Favoriting to follow. I'm hoping htese come out quickly!

Guys I had chapter 3 almost finished and my computer suddenly shut down. So I have to redo the whole thing. It may be another day or two. Sucks.

one of the best storys ive ever read :pinkiehappy:

875132 Wow, I had not expected that. You humble me.

What in the ghost of Celestia? Did she just leave her friends to die while she became an alicorn?

887810 They didn't die. She just took all the Elements into herself.

this was probably the best story ive read and if My Little Pony ends i want this to be how it ends because this was amazing :pinkiehappy:

901945 Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

902608 Luna's imprisonment in the moon caused her body to be put in a sort of stasis as opposed to Celestia who continued to age. The immortality was linked to her alicorn powers and since Luna did not age when she was trapped in the moon, she simply became a regular pegasus again and lived out a normal pony life.

That was great. I really love how she finds her own little student.

915180 Why thank you. I'm toying with the idea of a spinoff focusing on Stardust.

How wasn't this more popular? Seen plenty lesser stories get more views than this :ajsleepy: and this is definatly one of the good ones :twilightsmile:

1095936 It makes me appreciate every view even more. Thank you sir :pinkiehappy:

Good fic.
My only real complaint is that I think you could have gone much more in deapth than what you did.

1178796 I agree and maybe in the future I will go back and flesh it out a bit more. But for now I'm content letting this be my first fic as it is. Thanks for reading in any case.

Is Stardust a decedent of Luna?
:pinkiehappy:

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