Ah, abortion makes its entry into the stories of Equestria.

Oh my gosh........................ I don't know what to say. Happy yet sad chapter. IT'S GREAT! So moving and touching............ but I got a slap in the face. I am curious to see who is guilty.

1025398 I honestly don't know if I'm gonna go that route. Still mulling it over.

1025613 That's like exactly what I was going for. Glad you enjoyed it.

Wow that went from amazing and happy then you drove a stake through that and now I'm rooted to the spot wanting to know if I should table filp or keep going. The tension is crazy. I hope they can 'fix' the rainbow so that she doesn't need to carry that unwanted foal.

Keep going! Please! Just keep making it as epic as this chapter is and this story will be gold.

1025731 I hope you haven't written yourself into a corner. I never would've introduced this twist, because once it is introduced, it's difficult to avoid the (sigh) controversy regarding abortion while still doing it adequate justice. I mean, there are ways around it, but unless a discussion of post-rape abortion and its various cousins is what you intended, I think the story might be better off without it. That being said, you have introduced it, so I'm hoping you'll exceed my expectations of what might happen next. (Also keep in mind that the other reason I wouldn't have written this into a story is because I don't write stories. )

OMG Flutterdash image at the top!

1026137 I love contrast like that.

1026319 I'm not in a corner. I have several ideas for how to move forward and how I want to tie it in with the over-arc. Just a matter of decision really.

1026380 I just noticed that. My heart exploded. Twice.

1026415 oh my god lovley cliffhanger i hate you making me wait just kidding really looking forward to the next chapter full of emotions

1027262 You're welcome. *takes bow*

dun dun duuuun!