Good call with the double ending I'm happy to say I wasn't disapointed at all. Great story brohoof to you /). Although I did really want to see what happen right after she flatlined and everypone reactions
1941075 Yeah, I admit it was kind of nerfed, but whatever. There was gonna be a happily ever after somewhere in there.
1941812 I personally think the sad ending is better, but both are there for your own preference. I appreciate the constructive criticism. I don't have any specifically FlutterDash stories in mind at the moment, that will likely change
1941689 I shan't hold it against you (just call me Mr. Sappy Sapperton )
1940501 I panned ahead because it would've essentially been the same as the first act of the happy ending. Either way, I return the brohoof in kind. Glad you enjoyed it.
I've stuck with this story from the beginning, this is the first fiction I have ever read, it's sad to see it come to an end, but it was a huge moving emotion packed story. Simply, I love it.
sequel?
Good call with the double ending I'm happy to say I wasn't disapointed at all. Great story brohoof to you /). Although I did really want to see what happen right after she flatlined and everypone reactions
Wahhhh! This one is the better ending, but I'll stick to the happy ending. I too am a Sappy miss Sapperton.
1941075 Yeah, I admit it was kind of nerfed, but whatever. There was gonna be a happily ever after somewhere in there.
1941812 I personally think the sad ending is better, but both are there for your own preference. I appreciate the constructive criticism. I don't have any specifically FlutterDash stories in mind at the moment, that will likely change
1941689 I shan't hold it against you (just call me Mr. Sappy Sapperton )
1940501 I panned ahead because it would've essentially been the same as the first act of the happy ending. Either way, I return the brohoof in kind. Glad you enjoyed it.
1940444 Prequel actually.
1940356 *Takes Bow* Thank you.
Wow...... Great endings.
1944751 I thank you.
1976036 I'm glad you like it.
I've stuck with this story from the beginning, this is the first fiction I have ever read, it's sad to see it come to an end, but it was a huge moving emotion packed story. Simply, I love it.
2036063 I appreciate you saying so. Even if it sounds a bit cheesy, every view, every like, every comment I hold close to my heart
*tear*