im intrigued as to how you will continue.. what with having two versions of this now and all
I like your happy ending. So much too. Not sure I want to read the sad ending after such a ride... (But I probably will at some point) Good job on the story. The ending is truly sweet here. I like the sappy sort of endings and this does live up to it.
Despite my feelings against some parts of the story, you have given a worthwhile read. And I would most certainly read more of your Flutterdash in future, if ever you choose to write more on these two ponies.
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The sad ending was definitely powerful and really...well, bittersweet. At least Fluttershy will be able to raise her little filly.
But I'm sticking to THIS ending...because I'm a sap. Sappy McSapperson. XD
This was quite a journey, I have to say. Tough and sad, but overall, there is still something wonderful to have come out of either ending. Well done!
im intrigued as to how you will continue.. what with having two versions of this now and all
I like your happy ending. So much too. Not sure I want to read the sad ending after such a ride... (But I probably will at some point)
Good job on the story. The ending is truly sweet here. I like the sappy sort of endings and this does live up to it.
Despite my feelings against some parts of the story, you have given a worthwhile read.
And I would most certainly read more of your Flutterdash in future, if ever you choose to write more on these two ponies.
YES!
REJOICE!! ALL IS WELL!