1088892 Sad for Dash in the story... And I'm seeing that thier lives might finaly be on the mend is what I'm meaning... nothing wrong with your writing if thats what your worried about. Its maintaining its tone nicely...
1089187 awsome wonder if things will get heated (the bad one) between RD and 'Shy you know really looking at what it would be to have the child of the man you raped you and if you could truly love that child for who they are or will they not see past as the child is a product of rape
1089631 Indeed they may. I'm just as curious as you to see where it goes. I have a general outline, but even I get surprised by where the story takes itself.
Awwwww, I just love how Fluttershy is the protector this time. And you know what? It's almost natural for them to switch roles like this, it really is. The big spoon/little spoon is only the start of the symbolism to that. They really can switch roles and still have it intrinsic to their characters. Rainbow Dash can be fragile, especially as she is right here, and Fluttershy is really just perfect to handle it with how caring, sweet and gentle she is. It's adorable.
For Dashie. But I can see things starting to imporive...
1087143 In the story or the way I write it? Just curious.
1088892 Sad for Dash in the story... And I'm seeing that thier lives might finaly be on the mend is what I'm meaning... nothing wrong with your writing if thats what your worried about. Its maintaining its tone nicely...
Good work as usual. Poor Rainbow. At least now they have accepted the baby. Still curious as who the raper was.
1088944 I think every writer worries about that a little, but thank you for saying so.
1088970 I don't think any of you will see it coming.
1089187 awsome wonder if things will get heated (the bad one) between RD and 'Shy you know really looking at what it would be to have the child of the man you raped you and if you could truly love that child for who they are or will they not see past as the child is a product of rape
1089187 I don't think any of you will see it coming.
It was Scootaloo, wasn't it? :P
Anyways, great story; can't wait for more!
1090280 How in the hay did you figure it out?! No, I'm afraid Scootaloo will not be a rapist in this story.
1089631 Indeed they may. I'm just as curious as you to see where it goes. I have a general outline, but even I get surprised by where the story takes itself.
1091435 20% cooler
Awwwww, I just love how Fluttershy is the protector this time. And you know what? It's almost natural for them to switch roles like this, it really is. The big spoon/little spoon is only the start of the symbolism to that. They really can switch roles and still have it intrinsic to their characters. Rainbow Dash can be fragile, especially as she is right here, and Fluttershy is really just perfect to handle it with how caring, sweet and gentle she is. It's adorable.
1095222 You have quite a talent in making me see my own work in new ways..... Are you a wizard?!
1095516 Yes! I am a wizard!
1097048 I suspected. Never hide those freaky powers.
1097523 I shall not!
Good. Be as The Great and Powerful Trixie with your powers.....only less of an a-hole.
XD reading this in one night......
i am a speed demon reading-wize..