Hmmmm... guess what they are going to do... Pinkie needs to go find somepony else... leave Flutterdash alone! And yes I'm still following your story and I although im still not exactly how to feel about this fic... you have my support. Please do continue
1232416 I considered detailing the clop for this chapter, but decided against it. I don't write clop. I could, but I just don't. And you see him in the next side chapter. I don't know how many main chapters I want to do in between yet though.
1232705 interesing one thing im cruious is about the baby weather or not rainbow survives the baby will be born i wonder how it will look like also will the next chapter be a long one or will you continue to write thes less than 1000 word chapters?
1232815 Yeah, sorry about that. The side stories are like that deliberately, but I try to go longer with the main chapters but it doesn't work sometimes. I'll try to make them longer. As Rainbow and the baby, you have to wait.
1229567 I'm a little unsure about how I feel because of things like what happened to Dash etc. carrying that pony's foal and potentially going to die... the story is playing out in a rather brutal manor and it seems I cant turn my eyes from the page. But its Flutterdash so I'll keep reading.
1236606 Yeah, that's just me. I prefer darker stories that have a more serious tone. Kinda surprises me that I love MLP as much as I do, considering. Anyway, I thank you for reading.
No problem, I've got this bookmarked, check on it everyday. (I'd repeat my bio for reasons, but that will take up all the space) as I do with other stories, well only one, and it's similar to this in a way. Anyways keep up the good work
Hmmmm... guess what they are going to do...
Pinkie needs to go find somepony else... leave Flutterdash alone!
And yes I'm still following your story and I although im still not exactly how to feel about this fic... you have my support. Please do continue
Great chapter. I enjoyed it!
1229130 Is it sex? That is the question.
1229130 I'm just curious: What aspects are leaving you unsure? Oh and there's no way Pinkie is getting in the middle of the Flutterdash.
1229351 Even I don't know what happens behind closed doors *scans own mind* OMG! They totally did it!
1229567 will the next chapter be a clop also maybe in the next chapter somepony could describe how the father looks physicaly
1232416 I considered detailing the clop for this chapter, but decided against it. I don't write clop. I could, but I just don't. And you see him in the next side chapter. I don't know how many main chapters I want to do in between yet though.
1232705 interesing one thing im cruious is about the baby weather or not rainbow survives the baby will be born i wonder how it will look like also will the next chapter be a long one or will you continue to write thes less than 1000 word chapters?
1232815 Yeah, sorry about that. The side stories are like that deliberately, but I try to go longer with the main chapters but it doesn't work sometimes. I'll try to make them longer. As Rainbow and the baby, you have to wait.
1232831 what if its not an alicorn but a magicaly gifted pegisi ?
1232841 Nah, its an alicorn. But it will be different somehow.
1232868 bigger wings smaller horn? also though technacly royalty will her parents allowed her to be treated as such?
1232880 You'll see.
okay love the story so far keep up the good work
1229567 I'm a little unsure about how I feel because of things like what happened to Dash etc. carrying that pony's foal and potentially going to die... the story is playing out in a rather brutal manor and it seems I cant turn my eyes from the page.
But its Flutterdash so I'll keep reading.
1236606 Yeah, that's just me. I prefer darker stories that have a more serious tone. Kinda surprises me that I love MLP as much as I do, considering. Anyway, I thank you for reading.
Man, this is a dark story, but, it really catches my attention, not knowing what happens next, but I can't wait, i'm anticipating more :D
1293912 Thanks much.
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No problem, I've got this bookmarked, check on it everyday. (I'd repeat my bio for reasons, but that will take up all the space) as I do with other stories, well only one, and it's similar to this in a way. Anyways keep up the good work
1300319 I'm working on it. Its hard to find the time, but the next chapter will be up soon.
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Got it, I didn't read your profile at the time, sorry. I'll just be patient c:
1300477 No biggie.
*SSSAAADDD*
why do i not grasp the purpose of the royal we?