Another cliffhanger. Damn it! Now I'll be on the edge of my seat for a while
Oh well, nice twist again as always, I can't tell what this is wrapping up to be like, hopefully a slightly good/decent ending, but it is what it is I guess.
What. What are you trying say here? (about the baby looking like Twilight?) or is the only trouble with Cadence?
Hmmm... looks as if Dash's baby is not the only trouble in the room. Another short chapter. Keep going. Oh poor cadence, I can't wait to see whats happend to you.
1311120 The baby's appearance was a nod to the Rule 63 Twilight. I said in an earlier chapter they wanted to name him Dusk Shine. As for the length, the longest chapter I have written is only 1700 words. I try to make them longer but I just prefer shorter chapters that get right to the story progression. I do apologize.
1313462 did cadence die of so much blood loss or was her body unable to take the pain that comes with child birth that is worth mentioning in your next chapter
What a twist... Now I have to wait for the next chapter.
Another cliffhanger. Damn it! Now I'll be on the edge of my seat for a while
Oh well, nice twist again as always, I can't tell what this is wrapping up to be like, hopefully a slightly good/decent ending, but it is what it is I guess.
Good job like usual sir.
What. What are you trying say here? (about the baby looking like Twilight?) or is the only trouble with Cadence?
Hmmm... looks as if Dash's baby is not the only trouble in the room.
Another short chapter.
Keep going. Oh poor cadence, I can't wait to see whats happend to you.
1310915 I'll get it out as soon as I can.
1310940 I cliffhang like boss!
1311120 The baby's appearance was a nod to the Rule 63 Twilight. I said in an earlier chapter they wanted to name him Dusk Shine. As for the length, the longest chapter I have written is only 1700 words. I try to make them longer but I just prefer shorter chapters that get right to the story progression. I do apologize.
1311228 each to their own. Its all good. I write long chpaters, you write short ones... (Short and punchy... with plenty of cliff-hangers...)
here, have a preggers Dashie to lighten the mood to this dark story:fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/092/e/c/preggers_dash_by_dexiom-d4up4y8.jpg
1311228like the athor who wrote luna the mach maker right?
1311268 d'awwwww. So cute
1311731 Do what now?
Author who wrote luna the match maker its stars with a D i forgot who it was ahhh forget it
1313435 Done.
1313462 did cadence die of so much blood loss or was her body unable to take the pain that comes with child birth that is worth mentioning in your next chapter
1313625 I had planned on it. But that is also explained a bit in the previous couple chapters.
CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CURSES!
1315739 How?
1316794 Well, not exactly how she died, but Luna clearly explains the complications of giving birth to an alicorn baby to Rainbow Dash.
1316774 I'M SORRY! Actually I'm not. I like cliffhangers.....for the most part.
1317067 You just sounded like my piano teacher there....... LOL! I like cliffhangers too. It keeps me interested and makes me WANT the next chapter.
1317067 oh i thought that was just for celestia and luna's father
1317467 The point was to tell Rainbow Dash that he did it and every mare he impregnated over the years died.
1317133 Happy to hear it. Not that I sound like your teacher, but that you want more.
1317832 MOAR
1319509 I WILL! Dammit.
1320544 cool
oh...
sweet mother teresa.....