This story is a sequel to Goodbye old Friend
During a massive Equestrian war, Twilight is given a fatal wound,
I got the cover from this picture right here
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Silver Butcher
I shall Butcher your dreams
Silver Butcher
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Didn't have quite as big of an impact as the first one. This felt way too rushed. That said there is a definite improvement in grammer and sentence structuring in comparison to the first one.
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well thanks...and yeah it was rushed.
You read the end it kinda becomes comedy
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yeah, I tend to do that, it's so hard for me not to fall back onto comedy as a crutch
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I still wanna ship Luna and Twilight, I stand by that.
Now here
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I now regret posting this
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why's that?
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I now feel bad
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don't worry it's ok
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Plus both the previous story and this one brought back had memories
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oh dear, I'm sorry
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It's not your your fault I just wish I was there to say goodbye to her
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oh dear, oh, darling dear.
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I was at school I come home like I did every day to tell my grandma who was fighting cancer what happened I can't find her anywhere and my heart sank but had hope and asked what happened my mom told me she had died while I was at school. Let's just say I didn't leave the house for months....
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I'm so sorry, I wish I could give you a hug
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I didn't mean for this to happen
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Plus this happened on a day that I was gonna stop going to school
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I can't...I dunno...I'm sorry I'm very bad with these situations.
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It's ok I'm fine
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Plus that day made me a better person and all I want is for people to be happy and calm i do whatever I can to help them
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I'm calm, I'm happy, I just turned 20 today
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Ok but if we are ever in a voice chat or something like that I can tell a lie by voice alone like applejack can
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That is a really useful life skill and you should be proud.
Well not the best structure wise but I like the idea. I want Twilight to be with her friends even in death. I had her actually give up her immortality to pass with her friends in my story. Good job. Even if she does outlive them though, that doesn't mean it has to be forever! We get to decide now that the show is over!
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idk if this makes sense or if it's just me, but i feel like some parts in the middle of the story were kinda confusing
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I'll admit this one needs a rewrite