Dirty Pony Panties

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zachary12

zachary12 #1 · Feb 20th, 2018 · 2 · 6 · Messing in Panties ·

nice work on all the chapters.

DAMN HAMSTER

DAMN HAMSTER #2 · Feb 20th, 2018 · 2 · 3 · Messing in Panties ·

Ugh.

ApplePony

ApplePony #3 · Feb 20th, 2018 · 4 · 6 · Messing in Panties ·

Simply admit the obvious fact: you are not a writer. You don't know how to write interesting stories, your vocabulary is limited and descriptions are primitive. Your stories always have many downvotes, and it's not about the fetish itself, many writers can do it almost perfect when it comes to watersports: @HighLevelTeen, @The Inner Lewd and @TwilightPsycho. You can simply delete my comment, but it can make you think, and either improve the quality of the text, or stop writing.

The Dark Wolf

The Dark Wolf #4 · Feb 20th, 2018 · 1 · · Messing in Panties ·

I knew this was a mistake. This is the absolute last time and nothing any of my friends or fans can say will make me change my mind.

Rarity225

Rarity225 #5 · Feb 21st, 2018 · 2 · 3 · Messing in Panties ·

I thought these were great. Very entertaining. While yes, things can be improved. It was enjoyable nonetheless. Don't stop writing just because some people don't like it. If it's something you like to do. Go for it, and I know you like doing this stuff. Don't give up. :)

The Dark Wolf

The Dark Wolf #6 · Feb 21st, 2018 · 1 · · Messing in Panties ·

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It's just really hard when people with the fetishes dislike them saying I'm not good at writing, and they're probably right.

I don't think I was meant to be a fetish writer. I should have just followed my instincts not to submit my first story.

The Dark Wolf

The Dark Wolf #7 · Feb 22nd, 2018 · 1 · · Messing in Panties ·

Before I lost my confidence the first time, every time I'd think of a fantasy I'd want to share it with people who had the same fetishes. I know a few people do like my stories, but I'm just not a good enough writer in that department.

But now it's like I woke up from a trance. I will no longer share my fetish fantasies/stories with anyone. They're just not good enough. They're too lame, and they suck.

BronySquall

BronySquall #8 · Feb 26th, 2018 · 2 · 1 · Messing in Panties ·

For what little it's worth, I think your writing's not half bad. I'd say keep at it, maybe share it with a small, trusted group, and go from there. If you like writing, why let a few jerks getcha down?

The Dark Wolf

The Dark Wolf #9 · Feb 26th, 2018 · · 1 · Messing in Panties ·

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Because I'm not good at writing, but thanks for thinking I am. Comments like these mean a lot to me, more than you can imagine.

How do I limit my stories to a small trusted group? (I know a few users here who would be part of that group)

The Dark Wolf

The Dark Wolf #10 · Feb 27th, 2018 · · · Messing in Panties ·

I just wrote another one and tried to put more detail in it... I'm really reluctant to submit it, though. I'm afraid that it wasn't enough, even though I know a few users who will love it, one in particular I may have had in mind the most.

JWritesStuff