Your friendly neighborhood mechanic / fanfic writer. Don't worry, I'm good at both! :D
The fourth wall has been broken. In fact, comlpetely destroyed. Pinkie, Rainbow Dash, and Lyra pop out of a portal and try to make peace with us humans. How does the government handle the aliens? How does Celestia handle diplomacy? Why does one army General think something is amiss? Will any human notice before it's too late?
One-shot, no gore or anything, it's not that dark. Was meant to be a one-shot, but continuing it slowly.
Page generated in 0.102 seconds
Total duration
780 users online
1,170,855 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
Yeah, I saw that coming, actually.
984384 I hoped it wouldn't have been too obvious, oh well
WHAT THE SHIT!!!!!!!
Please do a sequel ?
Oh god...
That ending...
i.imgur.com/RV0PI.jpg
WTF you sick fuck , just kidding
, do a sequel please do it, but oh my god that wast totally unexpected!, i will totally will track the shit out of you 
nuf said, imagine if the true motives Pinkypie to travel to or world are to make us cupcakes, i mean just imagine!, and if ponies suddenly began to get addicted to human meat. fuck this is just sick bro i expect a sequel.
984664 Dude... spoilers much?
What in the name of fuck did I just read?
A good story with a twisted ending.
We need a sequel because I refuse to believe that this is where it should end.
Does anyone else realize this was an old Twilight Zone episode? It was called 'To Serve Man'
images.tvrage.com/people_galleries/14/39645/74788.jpg
987179 no shit lol
Epic fail of logic here.
1. Ponies and other equines -can't- eat meat. It would sicken them badly. Maybe even kill them too.
2. If ponies really were like this, all the other races would have banded together and wiped them out completely.
3. A race that follows Harmony would not do such a thing, it's totally against Harmony.
This is way far more likely how it would turn out - -
"Dane! Don't go in there! …The… the rest of the book… 'A Human for Ponies,' it's… it's a pet care book! It's a pet care book!"
Dane's face of confusion was instantly washed over by complete and utter shock. He looked quickly between the ponies, the gazes Pinkie and Dash were giving him confirmed his fear. Lyra's face was questionable, being either confusion or just a different version of the wide-eyed 'he knows' look the other two were giving him. He quickly acted on this new information, dropping his suitcase and trying to run for it, but it was too late. Before he knew it Rainbow Dash bucked him in the chest, and he fell into the portal.
FWOOOOOP.
-----------------------------------------------------
And this brings us back to the present.
Later Dane is on the farm at Sweet Apple Acres.
Applebloom : (smiling) Aw, don't be mad Mr. Dane. I'm gonna take good care of you. You're gonna love all the games we will play... like fetch, roll over, sit up.
Dane : (blinks)
And so began Dane's life as Winona mark 2.
- -
That's how it would actually end really.
988049 LOL I must admit your version is funnier but i was going for dark...
988907 Please sequal it!
988049 I forgot to mention, if you think meat would make equines sick, you should go check out the comments on Dash Eats Meat cuz the guys there did a great job of rationalizing my story.
...not sure if want
But I'm so curious
Definitely do want.
PS. I so knew Lyra would end up something like this =P
Yes I knew Lyra was too sweet to want kill humans like this.
AppleBloom on the other hand is pretty messed up
1333387 lol... love/hate it huh? Not my best work, just one of those things I had to put on the proverbial paper. But what a twist, huh?
1334661 Odd no matter how much i dislike the ponies eating humans i do love the story i can't explain it but then again i love all your fics
What you wrote about the ponies being from a dimension is technically inaccurate. ;-)
This story gives me a sense of déjà vu all over again. I wonder whether Twilight is in the Zone of eating humans Someone gave me a Rod of Sterling silver. ;-)
It would be cool for the 2 Danes to meet. They have very different experiences with ponies.
You might want to make Lyra Heartstrings fragile and unable to lift objects using her hooves and tail. She might have lost the pony-magic which makes ponies nearly indestructible and enabling them to use hooves, wings, and tails like hands when her horn broke.
Interesting variation on the "ponies meet humans" storyline. I'll be watching, but reserve judgement on the thumb up/down.
Also, sad Lyra. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_cry.png
Saw the name for the third chapter, and all I could think of was this:
4.bp.blogspot.com/-r4XfFwDfCI8/T24709-8PuI/AAAAAAAABoY/pD0A36_ybpo/s1600/Obvious+solution+escapes+you.gif
3669302 Yep, that's where it's from!
Can't believe you read one of my shittiest fics...
(Or did you? dun dun dun)
3669339
I actually didn't read it. I was perusing your "portfolio" when I saw that, got the reference, and decided to make my knowings known.
3669341 Oh well cool. Honestly I have many better fics for you to read, for when you're feeling up to it. This one... was not one of my (personally) successful ones.
So guess I was the only one looking forward to this concept in a HIE story?
Oh well, I guess the stories dead now.
6795631 Pretty much. Can't even say that I liked the concept that much.
I Liked this one. I think it makes for a good short story with some implied lore. Like, what if way back when in Equestria before the unification of the Tribes, there actually WERE humans, but they were basically just dumb beasts who turned out to be delicious? Eventually, they were hunted to extinction by Ponies who enjoyed eating meat because of the aforementioned tastiness , and over time Ponies started generalizing that all Humans were dumb beasts that taste delicious. Exceptions like Lyra STILL eat meat, but recognize that the Humans from Dane's world are actually sentient, and finds herself Fascinated by them. It seems to end in just the right spot; makes the reader ask questions like "What happened after that? Did Dane and the gang eventually win?" or "Is Princess Celestia even know this is happening? She's been around a long time, so she must at LEAST be aware of it to some extent. Is she in cahoots?" and come to their own conclusions.
7840017 Well damn, I'm glad you liked it.