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theRedBrony


Your friendly neighborhood mechanic / fanfic writer. Don't worry, I'm good at both! :D

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Twilight does some heavy duty research in the Canterlot Library, and finds out something that nopony should know. What will she do with this new-found knowledge?

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Woot~ so pro dude. Glad to see you post it on here. :rainbowkiss:

Excellent, excellent. I especially enjoyed Luna's reactions to a crazed Celestia barging in, heh heh.

Oh, and as this is apparently helpful: in the second paragraph, the phrase "Certainly she could some information there!" could likely use a "find" in there. That's the only issue that stood out for me, aside from a few staccato-burst sentences that hastened the pacing, eh.

Fun stuff! Great work!

:rainbowlaugh:

make a sequel? :pinkiehappy:

Not bad :twilightsmile:
i liked angry celestia

I like it so far man, Keep up the good work!:derpytongue2:

NOO!! Don't end it here:raritycry:

I want to see Twilight do Interdimensional travel, and destroy countles other worlds.

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That would be epic, with a side of twilight reciving :facehoof:

lol oh twilight you so crazy:twilightoops:

WHAT DID U DO LUNA NOFTHING

Damn dude, your story is settin' off like a rocket!:rainbowwild: I'm glad it's getting the goodness it needs, Mine is slowly getting views and Dislikes. xD But nevertheless, can't wait for the next one!:pinkiecrazy:

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HA! Little Discord and Fluttershy:yay:

This was a very fun read!:rainbowlaugh:

607053 perhaps if I had more likes... :trixieshiftright:

I like that when Twilight's asking her friends to come with her to Canterlot, Applejack's name didn't turn up once.

782497 That's funny, I never noticed! I guess it's assumed that the reader would know who'd be apple-bucking lol :ajbemused:

Oh Twilight, you so crazy. Sequel yes?
Oh I would love to see this made into an episode!

828516 Oh I might do a sequel, I've toyed with a few ideas, but I have a couple other things in the works atm.

853450 NO! SEQUEL NOW OR I SET OFF THE BOMB!:twilightangry2:... I mean, :pinkiehappy: it might be in your best interest to write a sequel, after all, you wouldn't want to disapoint your fans, would you?:pinkiecrazy:

.... I hope you're still thinking about maybe a sequel.. you left so many good hooks for them. The scroll still there, ( can you imagine if Trixie got a hold of that!) and what did Luna have to say about this after she found out who did it? and the original spell she was looking for... so many good hooks.

1298105 Damn right I did!

Sadly, I have too many other things in the works. Even so, I haven't even structured out a sequel in my head yet. Perhaps some day... :trixieshiftleft:

I HAPPENED TO THE LAST PONY, THATS WHAT!!!!!

"Do you know what happened to the last pony who did that?"........."Nopony does."

*Shivers and shudders for a moment.*
Damn, Celly, you scary.

1428722 1890886 I like to think kind caring Tia has the capacity for... cruelty.... hehehe...

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Capacity for cruelness

What ever are you talking about?
Celestia is a sweet pony who wouldn't hurt or scare a soul...
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Cruel enough to sentence someone to me.
But I never actually tortured her, and after some time we began to know eachother better and then we bacame good friends. After more time passed our relationship grew into something more and we fell in love with eachother. Today we still reside on my island with our son.
Celestia doesn't know this because the land is not hers, and she knows better than to trespass on my property.

Nopony knows because it was Celestia who did it.

The last pony to do it probebly ended up as a statue.

Interdimensional travel, huh? Now that would be nice to have story about that. Oh, wait...

4080547 I know that feel bro. :moustache:

That bit with the little Discord was great, also mad Celestia.

"The best thing about having a giant nuclear reactor is that no one's willing to dig too deep for missing ponies." - Celestia

Lol, that was a good read. I thought for a moment that celestia would banish twilight to a distant star or something. Also i loved how you portrayed celestia being intimidating. It was spot on and not out of character - she just went back to the castle after reprimanding twilight (severly at that) saying she expects an apology letter. Nice, touch there making celestia intimidating without breaking her out of character. Leaving a like :3

Edit: Forgot to mention my love for Luna's hilarious reaction to angry celestia: 'Don't send me to the moon' lol love it.

4416880 lol I'm glad you enjoyed it. I always imagined Tia would have a nasty temper if somepony crossed a line.

It could have been even worse for Twilight... "Well! Now that you've learned how to move the sun and moon, Luna and I are taking a week off! I have complete confidence in you to take care of things while we're gone, Ta!" :trollestia:

...Buh? :twilightoops:

"Do you know what happened to the last pony who did what you have done?"

"He got the opportunity to learn the inner workings of the sun. He's still studying it!":trollestia:

*I have NO IDEA why this was added to a Twilestia shipping group, no shipping here!

Maybe because of the picture you used?:facehoof:

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Maybe because of the picture you used?:facehoof:

Huh? The cover art? How the hell is that shippy? :rainbowderp:

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Huh? The cover art? How the hell is that shippy? :rainbowderp:

I'm just being facetious. This story isn't the first one I've come across that got put into the wrong weird group. Who knows why that happens. (sorry, no "shrug" smilie on the site, either) :facehoof:

7142874 lol ok. And yeah, we need one.

Wow :twilightsmile: This is awesome. Simply awesome.

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Really DEEP inside THE SUN.:trollestia:

What did Celestia mean by "Nopony does"? Hmmm, well Twilight learned how to lower and raise the sun and moon so, I guess that's something, and she has a copy spell although I wouldn't share it with anyone.

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