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SIaanme


Writer, student, comes up with too many ideas. Thinks Best Pony is Pinkie Pie, Luna, Fluttershy. That's not an order. They are all best pony.


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After a thousand years in the moon, and even longer of not being yourself, how do you remember what you were truly like? Princess Luna isn't sure who she is anymore, and tries to rediscover herself through how others see her.

Some shipping in Chapters 2 & 4.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 16 )

Liked it despite some bits of oddness (Oh, Fluttershy, you so random). It had a fairly interesting quality to it in that it almost feels like reading through a children's book such "Are You My Mother" with that gentle sense of confusion and discovery (both actual and averted) in spite of some of the heavier (some might say sillier) themes involved.

Was kinda hoping that it would have one of those epilogue moments of "and now we meet in real life" rather than the close on the moral (though I suppose it does fit with the overall aesthetic of the story better), but, yeah, nice fic here.

Alright, let's see here...

I liked it. The characters acted like they do in the show (With the exception of Fluttershy and Rarity's... feelings for Luna), the plot was simple but engaging, and you did a nice job of altering Luna to fit everyone's views of her.

I noticed that it seemed like each character was adding a bit of themselves to Luna; Rainbow saw her as brash and prideful, Fluttershy as sweet and timid, Applejack as a hard (If inefficient) worker, Rarity as... never mind that one, Pinkie as a fun-loving prankster, and Twilight as a younger version of Celestia. Considering that these are all dream-versions of Luna, with the other characters' subconscious creating her, this makes a lot of sense. I don't know if you did that intentionally, but it worked well.

I didn't notice any glaring spelling or grammatical errors, which is always a good sign.

All in all, a pretty good story. Not quite as engaging as others I've read, but it was still fun to read. Well done. ...Shoot, now I want a moon-base.

This is a wonderful start to a story. You've got a great question, and you've made Luna a sympathetic main character.

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story!

Two things made me crack up with laughter:

"Thanks the other one!"

and

"Taste the rainbow!"

A funny story; I'm enjoying your tale!

*L*A*U*G*H*T*E*R*

The forest animals got an education that evening. They didn't know Fluttershy could make all of those noises!

Your sense of humor remains spot-on. This was great, physical comedy.

I think that there's an unwritten law that the library MUST BE DESTROYED. On a regular basis.

:twilightoops:

There's a small formatting error in this story. After the sentence "Calm down Rarity. I'm sure there's a good explanation for this...", you need to close the italics.

This is not as funny as your earlier stories, but it's more touching. And I'm appreciating that the different characters see very different Lunas. You have a good, light touch in your characterization. Well done!

:pinkiehappy:

Pinkie breaks the fourth wall BEAUTIFULLY. Hee! Luna should take up that offer.

And Pinkie's Luna is very, very close to Pinkie herself. A fun character!

*WILD APPLAUSE*

One of the more fun fanfics I've read, with a good moral.

I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for having written it.

:heart:

I very much enjoyed reading this. The story is amusing (apart from Rarity's chapter, which is sweetly touching instead) and flows well, and the different characterizations of Luna feel very appropriate for these dreams.

I did notice a few spelling errors here and there, but they did not detract too much from the overall quality of the story.

That was fun. Seriously, it was a good ride. :raritystarry:

Pinkie Pie: Butcher Extraordinaire :pinkiecrazy:

The apple tree?!?
Wonderful!

A word of advice. Don't read this while listening to Dream Police.

809804 my god you're right that song goes to well with this story :D

Ya know, as I read this story I was imagining it as a episode in MLP :) it flowed rather well (despite a few spelling errors) I loved how she used astreoprogection to go into the ponie's dreams and how they viewed Luna in their own ways and they funny parts where I thought it was about to turn into a clopfic XD again I'll say it's a rather fine story excellent work!! Keep it up

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