Luna just wants a piece of cake.
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AnchorsAway
A sailor who writes in his spare time.
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I love this! It's just the right combination of rhyme structure, heartwarming shenanigans, and most importantly: CAKE. If every poem had cake, the world would be so much better!
Fantastic work, Anchors!
Fantastically written, and with a very lighthearted subject matter. Very good, but while not perfect, since some rhymes did feel a bit of a stretch, this was amazing and so fresh to read. 9.5/10, fantastic.
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Thanks for the feedback. It is a great learning experience that I hope to refine across several more stories. Expect more soon.
*slow clap*
That was beautiful!
As a writer of Zecora, I do enjoy such tales.
Ones that rhyme consistently, such a challenge often fails.
Your story's metre rarely stumble, which I am very glad to say,
But I wish I'd read at bedtime rather than the start of my day.
Cozy fics should be enjoyed with chamomile at hand.
At the time of writing this, it's morning in Japan.
Perhaps tonight once the sun has set and I take a break,
I'll curl up with this fic again and read it with some cake.
Edit: 8:30 PM Same Day
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