Wandering Sunrise remembers Equestria as it once was: a land of harmony, broken by strife. She was sealed in a Stable-Tec stasis pod the day the Megaspells hit... and she wakes up in a pool of water, surrounded by strangers.
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Very nice! Sunrise's the meaning of a important point: Never judge People from the outside but The Inside. Something She can be proud of.
As a side note, i fear for nyota when it comes to her Mood Swings during pregnancy.
Also, That bat Pony, a dummy or Real? The way you wrote it makes it look like both
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How do you mean? Dummy or real? She is real.
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I mean that bat Pony Sunrise is supposed to shoot for Target Practice in her flashback
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The bat pony was helping assist with the training. I believe the target was a bullseye
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Makes Sense. It just looked for me that the bat Pony is the Target, given how its written
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Perhaps you can explain how and I can address it a little better? I need a specific passage to work from.
Well, shoot. I had a feeling that Sunrise's dad was going to be dead since she found out how long it has been since the war ended. On the bright side, she got to say goodbye. As someone who has personally experienced both sudden unexpected death and drawn out death, being able to say goodbye made it more bearable; it didn't hurt any less, but my mind was more prepared for it.
Anyways, it's both interesting and sad to see how Sunset's journey has affected her. She almost killed a poor mare that was trying to bring her breakfast in bed. It has me really worried for her mental state in the next chapter, especially since her BF is temporarily away.
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It's going to be a rough ride. One that even I am unprepared to truly write.
It's going to be fun through and there is a light coming, when the darkest point hits us all; the light of dawn finds you. Look for the Sunrise.
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Also, I can see where Bronycommander is coming from with the shooting memory and mistaking the bat pony for the target. The way it is currently written makes it seem like Sunrise turns her head with the loaded gun in her mouth to look at Chroma Slip, where I'm guessing it was intended to be a glance out of the corner of her eye type of thing. Here's the specific phrase:
I looked to my right and there was a very large thestral, a bat pony.
P.S. Sorry for the trash formatting. I'm on mobile right now.
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Fixed it.
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That reminds me of the chorus for the version of Eve that's sung by Flittzy. "It's always darkest before the dawn... With tomorrow comes yesterday's fall... No we can't be afraid of change."
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I appreciate your unexpectedly quick responses.
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Hey did you see the audiobook? It has begun and we have music from it too :)
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Well I mean I did just wake up again, split shift sleeping right now.
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https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCK4joD2e9SwtXxn7dXIudCQ
All of it is going up here. Next Chapter comes out at WCPC.
A really good chapter. Loves the scene on the bridge as well as the symbolism of the bridge itself. Overall compelling and emotional scene.
I also will have to say I liked the batpony. A very interesting addition of a bread of ponies that is hardly represented in most FoE stories, particularly during the flashbacks to the past.
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When you are in a war of annihilation, I don't think you will say no to Threstal recruits.
Caught up. Nothing to report. Good chapter. Hard core feels. Hope you're staying healthy. Till next time our thoughts are with you!
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your mug is getting mailed when the post office opens next week; they are closed for non pre-paid packages right now.
Also *hugs* I am doing lovely more worried about you since your mandated state shutdown.
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I thank you for your concern! But have some faith in the old boy here, I still have five full field manuals on NBC and I bet this Chair Force Sergeant could build an Apple Orchard in my backyard....(full decon station and limited triage unit for chem, bio, and nuclear...had to do it several times with my unit...) Though I will laugh at the meme...This is the first time we can save the world by staying inside reading or watching Netflix! Take care and know I'm doing my best for the whole family!
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I am more than happy to hear you are doing well. Thank you for the reassurance :)
I downloaded this and then immediately read the inrire thing in two and a half days really enjoying it so far and am excited for the next chapter. I expect large amounts of emotional trauma and maybe more tank fixing can’t wait
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I am both flattered and applaud your ability to read all of this in 2 1/2 days.
I'm glad you are enjoying it so far.
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:) Glad you are enjoyign the KABOOM!
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Dawwww Thank you I am glad we hit the right ques.
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Welcome to the life of those who were the last generation before the war ended.
They were born during the war.
The war went for almost 2 decades.
They knew nothing but that the war was there.
it became distant and further away.
Then suddenly, it was all over.
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No, no I was not. It caught me off guard, but this whole story has had many unexpected twists and turns.
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Good, 50 will be ready next week and so will 51.
is there a european based option for getting the books? I really want to get them, but the shipping costs are killing me.
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The shipping costs hurt me as well.
The min I can ship them for is 55$ USD. I am sorry for this but I would happily ship them to you if someone can pay for the shipping and ship them together.
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I have shipped books to Germany, Austria, Norway, UK, France, Italy, Serbia, Russia, Poland, Greece, South Korea, China, Tiawan, Japan, Austrailia, New Zealand, Vietnam, India, and South Africa.
I've been meaning to ask, how far behind is the story from the weekly livestream sessions?
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Well about 12 months but honestly it's like 1 book behind.
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Oh my?
reminds me of a comic book where Cadence called Flurry Heart "princess of explosions"...