Wandering Sunrise remembers Equestria as it once was: a land of harmony, broken by strife. She was sealed in a Stable-Tec stasis pod the day the Megaspells hit... and she wakes up in a pool of water, surrounded by strangers.
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I am saving it for a proper bing read, just going to wait you out. To many incomplete story's in my head.
8634556
I've got parts 4-6 being edited right now.
The next chapter of part 3 should be up around Saturday Morning or Friday Morning depending on my mood.
But yeah I will be marking significant chapters that mark the end of an ACT. We are still in ACT 1 right now
8634576
Oooh, acts have starts and end, bing reading is coming soon. XD
Glad Chifundo could help you calm in the shed
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Anticipates talking to you in the comments.
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Well I mean Chifundo is the calming one, Nyota is the serious one, Alguacil is the single aspect one, and Corners is the Crazy one. Quick Stitch is the Sane one.
Quick Stitch really isn't the sane one. No one's found a way into the crazy yet.
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Oh but that makes it all the more interesting that you are foreshadowing it for me! Before we even introduce the character in the written version ;)
Ahh poor Buddy. He was such a good character. And a good doggy. ☠
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And now you know why he got a lot of early writing time ;)
Fallout, When one had enough Death, but Death is just getting started on new Graves for the new Bach to fill them up. 👿
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Sounds 90% accurate.
RIP Buddy, you were a good dog. Yes you were. Ugh I saw an error somewhere in the writing but my fuddled brain forgot promply where it was. Eh.
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Maybe you were distraught enough to forget it? Which means that I did Buddy justice building up to his death.
Dammit, now I'm crying, at the grenade range no less...
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Wow really? It actually had that much of an impact? I mean we are going to do some re-writing and tuning up but wow, good to know *hugs* sorry we made you tear up.
Damn that was so blinding fast! I missed how that went down, and now I see why party requires helmets from now on!
Just spotted a couple typos right next to each other, FYI.
Too bad about Buddy, but gunfights without consequences are going to be rare. Looks like Sunrise is going to have to grow up a bit faster.
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Fewer of these show up later but I actually appreciate people sending me information when they find one. If you find one, point it out here and let me get it fixed.
Techically, she's still a filly as im stasis, she couldn't Age.
and she must be Related to pinkie pie, the tail and Sense are a Dead giveaway
The part really showed the difference between Sunrise, a post-apocalypse filly and the rest of the group who grew up in the Wasteland.
Ponies don’t normal wear cloths, silly. I can’t imagine a pony being bothered by that, when you grow up in a culture where almost nopony wears any pants.
Not sure if it was a smart choice to chase after the one guy nothing shooting at your group, when there’s a firefight going on between your team and a bunch of raiders.
Cannibalism in Fallout: Equestria never made sense to me. Yes Ponies can eat small amounts of meat. And yes we humans like to eat stuff that’s not healthy and could potential kills us if we ate too much of it (nutmegs for example) so sapient ponies probably do the same.
Still a cannibal lifestyle that requires a pony to eat large tons of meat would make you sick and death in very short order. Even by Raider standards that would probably a very short life.
Mind you that’s not me criticizing your story but a general issue I have with this setting.
RIP Buddy, the surprisingly polite sand dog. The group has only been outside the cave for a day and already suffered a causality.
Within two days Sunrise watched somepony die in front of her, had to put down feral ghouls, got shot at, saw the mutilated corpse of a cannibal victim, got almost beaten to death by a drug-crazed raider and lost a friend. Chance are it gets only worse from her. I wonder if she’s going to adept to his new reality or if she’s going to break sooner or later.
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To answer your thoughts:
1. Yes Sunrise is used to talking
2. In Pre-War and the Show they try to NOT walk directly behind each other but off to the sides, as a matter of courtesy; hence why I bring this up.
3. Nyota thought he fell and the shots had not registered in our heads yet.
4. Cannibalism in this case is used as an intimidation tactic to keep prisoners and slaves in line. If you don't do what we want, we'll eat you instead.
5. I mean it can get better right?
Well Buddy, you had a good run. A short run, but a good one.
I know this is based off of a tabletop rpg, but I do appreciate the suddenness and realism of death in this story. It demonstrates well the harsh world Equestria has become.
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I cried writing this part, and I know 2 parts coming up that I'm going to have a ton of difficulty getting through.
Did Buddy just get a streak of bad rolls? I didn't know it was that easy to die in D&D. Will he come back as a different, fresh character now?