Wandering Sunrise remembers Equestria as it once was: a land of harmony, broken by strife. She was sealed in a Stable-Tec stasis pod the day the Megaspells hit... and she wakes up in a pool of water, surrounded by strangers.
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Congratz, you got featured again. 5/16/2019, for your reference.
Maybe add a comma after “four tons”
Maybe put upgraded before “T-54B”?
I think there’s an extra period there, unless you’re doing a ...
Sunrise certainly lives up to your community's name of princess of boom
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It seems this story just keeps going and going
Nice picture, saw it before. And Sunrise showing so much mercy honors her.
Apart from, her, Nyota and Nugget (That's the filly's name right?) Quick stitch's also one of my favorite characters in your story. Why? Because the medic is the most important and valued soldier who can turn the ride of battle. And without Stich, Sunrise had died a long time ago.
And by the way, should you need help with German in future chapters, I could help
9626026 As do many, especially in my genre.
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Well I know where it ends it's getting there that is the important part. The journey in this case is more important than the destination.
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Temperance is the virtue of the merciful.
When your temperance runs out; be fearful.
For to those around you, will discover you are wrathful.
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Which part, the casually kicking the grenade or the nuclear explosion?
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Indeed. I am quite a merciful person myself in shooter/strategy games.
And what do you think about Quick Stitch efforts?
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yes
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You learned well padawon when to simply say Yes between two choices :)
9626262 True, true.
best story ever
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Hmmm, I guess save for her intelligence and speech and cutie mark, she carries the attributes of a blank. That’s odd. Well I guess I’ll find out what she truly is then later...
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working on it!
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I redacted what I let slip, although anyone with good reading comprehension and brains will figure it out in the chapter, LOL!
Can't find any real glaring errors. Good read! Keep it up!
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Glad to hear those words today.
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Yeah I’m a slow reader. It will take me a bit. Thanks for responding to my late comments though.
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I like comments, it tells me people are actually reading.
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Well then, curiouser and curiouser. I’m actually starting to feel bad for Sunrise. She’s been through the ringer and slowly discovering more about herself through patchy memories. So far she has a had a rough past.
Another good chapter! but now I must sit patiently for chapter 34.
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*shoves in corner to make you wait*
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The past she doesn't remember which makes it so much worse when you go: "I did what?"
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Well, frankly I can't remember anymore
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Sorry I missed it on the first pass through.
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It's fine. Though given that, if she ever considers having a child with Nyota, adaption is the only option. Except the cut wasn't so difficult if you understand
Another good chapter! but now I must sit patiently for chapter 34.
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Awww! Not the corner! (must be a big corner), I said I would be patient.
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Oh yeah that’s even worse
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Yeah that’s what scares me.
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Oddly enough Adoption is not the only option. Get ready for a very wild ride.
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Are you prepared for the level of Dread you will face?
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Okay. I just spoke from experience, as I was born that way and the uterus of my mother was removed. Thus me saying "Except the cut wasn't so difficult if you understand", that it hadn't to be removed in her case
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Probably not. Poor Sunrise has really gone through the grinder
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I guess that was a detail I missed in the original FoE. Those three in this FoE were not the innocent little girls we knew from the show.
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That you are not incorrect about.
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LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed the romance and the joke.
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They are really the last thing from innocence.
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Indeed.
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Well the story describes the car as being a the “Q series” and a primary vehicle bought by “buck ball moms” AKA “soccer moms”. Soccer mom cars were usually the larger SUVs or minivans known for their larger cargo and passenger capacities. The first vehicles that came to mind we’re the Infiniti QX series crossovers and SUVs which is the upscale side of the Nissan brand. The same brand which sold the popular minivan, the Nissan Quest. All vehicles having a Q in their model names.
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Wow, that took some effort and makes me realize you're probably right.
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These ones. I’m just trying to get grips with some elements of the story as I find it difficult to be able to sit down and read through an entire chapter on one go. Sometimes I need additional info as I can’t catch everything. My job type and attention span keep me from reading very far.
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I would answer that but that would be spoilers for as of yet unwritten parts of the story.
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Yeah I figured it was quite spoiler
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She is used to having her H.U.D., it's how she sees the world.
Imagine a person with glasses; and you break the glasses.
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Also, I don’t mind spoilers. If you don’t mind sharing said spoilers, perhaps I could get them via DM?
(Good lord that sounds like a drug deal going down)
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Hmmmm...I suppose.