Wandering Sunrise remembers Equestria as it once was: a land of harmony, broken by strife. She was sealed in a Stable-Tec stasis pod the day the Megaspells hit... and she wakes up in a pool of water, surrounded by strangers.
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Okay! So Pinky interspecies voyeurism is a thing......Good job on this chapter.
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Really? A good job with no issues?
Nice to See Sunrise getting a break From fighting, she deserves it. And getting a good Night with her lover.
Also, interesting flashback to her Transformation.
I like your Sense of Humor
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I was reading this pretty quickly. I wanted to know when the next boot dropped. So your spell checker may have left an "s" off "run" to make it "runs" somewhere..... But as for the rest, I chalked it up to how the character was speaking....the Griffin characters in particular. Keep it up!
11th paragraph from the bottom. "gasped for air and found I could easily breath.' I think you want breathe not breath.
All and all another good down time chapter. I have to say i miss thiose fun Rp time we did back then between games. I hope we find time for more of them.
reminds me of "the black griffon" by Mercedes Lackey, where griffons had to put on a fancy flying display AND have mid-air sex to actually have babies.
Reeeeeeee
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