Another well-made chapter, great work as always! And Sunrise, if you would only know about DJ-Pon-3.

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She is probably going to find out!

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I already suspected that. I apologize should I have bothered you with my last comment regarding the cameo. Just wanted to be sure if there's anything in particular you want for her cameo

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Sokay, I just get busy and forget to do stuff.

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Just wanted to make sure everything's fine. Old habit.

I can send another PM if you want or you me when you have time.

Chapter chock full of shocks, revelations and emotions! Twitty did not actually say anything about eating Al's face, but I chock it up to Panicking Pony thinking and putting nightmare fuel in place. Loved the pathos of dealing with old relations while in a new one, and learning more of the past that Sunrise was unaware of.
So, now I know how much Twitty freaks out Sunrise with this head space reveal. But scarier than a Manti-kitty?
Moon was pleased at how well that worked out.

"They snickered as Nyota and I approached and their gaggle."..
approached their gaggle (extra and?)

Why don’t we go get us some rooms at Honey Hearthfire’s Flop House and just let this place out.

Let this play out......

" It wasn’t chiton but it sure looked like. "
It sure looked like it...

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Much better than the original Chapter 1 or 27.

That moment I realized that this story is that good

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When you got to the end of my current writing on it? and know I'm working on chapter 30 tonight?

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Lol

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oh?

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Hmm?

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I was wondering what the laugh was about.

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It was just the way ya said that message is all.

I forgot how mental the session was when we found out about twitty, and nice work filling out the Coffee Stain stuff.

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just wait till next session

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awaiting chapter 30 with baited breath

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Working on it.

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No pressure, I am quite patient

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Well Headdie, there was that other bit with Twitty just before the party left Silver Fang, I wonder if that will freak out our bombardier pony more?

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I Guess they could

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Oh there is gonna be many more flashbacks to come and as for the Boo and Corners thing, well this is about to get really dark.

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Eager to See it. If you don't mind me asking, did you get my pm?

So she doesn’t get cloned every time she dies, she uses a soul from that black box and gets resurrected? It’s like a soul jar or something? And why did she freak out so badly from having her Pipbuck removed? I’m thinking her Pipbuck and that box are linked somehow?

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Given 88 said that only "she" was attuned to the black box (and how much this bungle angered agent 9), it's more likely that Wandering's blackbox detects her death and her soul jumps to another black box body whenever she dies. Then magic slowly converts the body into a copy of her from inside out, which explains why her current skin is so much older than expected even though the blood doesn't age, and why she keeps showing up in different colours.

This would also explain why she has a fresh Stable 34(43?) outfit everytime she returns- she's overwriting the bodies of fellow stable residents.

This could also explain why Wandering's memories are locked away (Pinkie Pie abstraction aside)- she hasn't yet fully restored her brain from its latest backup or some of the data has become corrupted.

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You are close and yet so far off! Some of the details are RIGHT! but most of them are wrong.

I reached to grab some water and offered it to Coffee Stain. Nyota grew a face of pure mischief and laughed, “Alright fine, Coffee Stain; squeaker or screamer?” I didn’t get to swallow, I was spewing it across the table it even came out of my nose! The sheer level of embarrassment to a question I couldn’t even remember the answer to was the highest it had been ever as far as I could remember!

i guess you could say the angel with a shotgun got...double pumped lol

Coffee has been an amazing addition to the story. Praise to all she is involved in. She got so much character development and spread it both to Sunrise and Nyota. Again, her decisions are very interesting, hard to anticipate and yet reasonable. Coffee wants happiness over anything else to bestow on Sunrise, she must love her that dearly. As the saying goes "If you love something, set it free", Coffee leaves no burdens for Sunrise to dwell on, no begging or taking her love by force. She leaves with an offer that she will always take Sunrise back. Magnificent.

Very wholesome and all, but it took away the suspense of the filly scouts as a threat. Coffee is a leader (I think), an eternal one that isn't going to be overthrown in any way, so no conflict.

IDK what to think of Twitty at this point. We've been barely introduced to it. It just comes out so randomly and out-of-nowhere.

Nyota shook his head, “I’m a Skatterri.”

Even now I can't contain myself. I've read it hours ago and been giggling about this misspell for a while. I can't even it's just so good! The best part is Coffee repeats it later. I'd like to think that this was an in-universe slip-up by Nyota that noone bothered to correct and it sunk in enough for Coffee to repeat him as well.

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