Wandering Sunrise remembers Equestria as it once was: a land of harmony, broken by strife. She was sealed in a Stable-Tec stasis pod the day the Megaspells hit... and she wakes up in a pool of water, surrounded by strangers.
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I liked that fourth wall reference and the Enemies scrambling out of the trenches remind me of the Attack of the Dead men, if you're familiar with.
Sunrise, your Determination to Save Children honors you, they suffer the most in war. And sometimes, you have to Sacrifice something to Save someone, doing something you dislike.
By the Way, i Hope my Last pm reply wasn't too much for You. And are you familiar with Team Fortress 2? Gave me a Funny thought for Sunrise
Sunrise, sometimes the only options you have are bad, worse and unthinkable. You tried bad and worse before doing the unthinkable. Bet they didn't think of that. Yes, it hurts. Yes, you have to live with it. We know it hurts. Let your friends help. This burden is easier when others help you bear it.
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You all know a feels chapter is coming next right? or a giant surprise you don't expect.
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Yes I am familiar with TF2 and I haven't had a chance to really read your last PM. Too busy at the moment.
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Okay, sorry, old about of mine to be sure. About Team Fortress 2, as she technically Russian, imagine her doing the Kazotsky Kick.
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I'm sure of that, just responding how I felt at the end of this chapter. What happens next? I'll just have to wait and see, yes?
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Picture 1 Added, Picture 2 in progress.
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Got the 1st of 2 pictures from this chapter in too.
Bigga badda boom! And that was a love story too! Keep up the good work!
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Okay, eager to See what do you Think of the Scenes And what do you Think of the Funny thought?
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I heart you too ;)
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Soon™
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Sure Thing
1000th comment? Done! Wait, I need to do something else. How are you doing today Fi?
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Still sick but feeling better slowly.
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Good to hear! Feel better soon!
And now I can leave the fear of reliving this chapter behind thankful I dont have to re-experience it again.
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Why? Was it that bad for you?
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I'm mostly better today.
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I knew this one would be really emotionally heavy
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and borderline edgelordy.
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given that as a party we committed 2 war crime level actions in the space of 10 minutes, I think that kind of emotional shit is warrented
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Fair, and now for a 20K Word Chapter!
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Good to hear.
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Less the Chifundo chapter and more the "Chifundo dun fucked up" chapter
... ... My heart weeps for Wandering Sunrise right now.
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Oh it's always going to get darkest before the dawn.
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I can see why its a good song.
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I agree, death and cuddles for all
My initials spell Henry M.A.D
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SO you are Henry Mutually Assured Destruction?
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Okay. I'm surprised you replied to that old comment. Anyway, I hope my PM wasn't too much and look forward to read the next chapter when it's done
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Sadly not Mallard Attfield-Downes
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But you could always introduce yourself as Miss/Mister M.A.D.
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Oh I know that. I just like to think that if ever she finds out the truth about Fluttershy she’s in for a real shocker. And hopefully she can drop a little bit of the naivety. Just enough that doesn’t get her too banged up.
WMDs and Pathos! the regrets, the guilt! the horror! Damn this was good,,,,,Hmmm, so you guys killed what turns out to be(Redacted)....Oh Boy!
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They don't know that yet! SHHHH!!!!
Well this is going to eat her up on the inside worse than any heartburn.
I imagine this is a tad bit how Truman must have felt back in 1945 as Sunrise feels right now.
Hey you never answered my questions from my other comment a chapter or two back...are the answers to those questions too spoilery to confirm or deny?
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Which questions did I miss?
sunrise just pulled some spec ops the line shit! reaching level 11 wasn't nearly worth the self-loathing she'll get from megaspelling thousands. poor girl might have a bigger killcount than blackjack genociding her own vault with poison gas! it's a bit cliche for fallout equestria protaginists to do worse shit than littlepip burning down arbu, but this hits harder than most of them.
A lot of big changes appear in this chapter. The megaspell genocide introduces some part of Sunrise will be struggling against. It has been a while since some internal conflicts inside her on this scale and I am looking forward to her growing through this. As n8dagr8088 pointed out, it is similar to genocides other heroines did. But similar events aren't bad as long as the story fits them, like here. The main difference in Sunrise's case is that she planned this. Both for Pip and BJ the genocides were more or less impulsive responses. Sunrise knew what she was doing; her actions will leave the radioactive crater there for everyone to see and remember her actions for decades. Additionally if we knew what these ponies were and what was their drive was the impact of the decision would be much bigger.
I like the mention that this is the first of many hard choices she will have to make. No more 100% on all fronts, her actions will have consequences.
The explicitly introduced "Raider Sunrise" gives me personally so much hope for this story. An inevitable, always watching kind of threat that you can never get rid of.
I also applaud the "speech" where she wants to increase morale at the Roof at all costs. Really feels like the books she has been reading are at play here.
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Was trying to capture what a reasonable leader who doesn't want to end the world feels when they are faced with that choice, that button that no one wants to press because it represents the end to all things that matter.