Wandering Sunrise remembers Equestria as it once was: a land of harmony, broken by strife. She was sealed in a Stable-Tec stasis pod the day the Megaspells hit... and she wakes up in a pool of water, surrounded by strangers.
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Of course! Why wouldn't I do that?
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Got it :)
Sowing?
This one seems a little jumbled.
Breathe
Hot :U
And yes, with the PER that Quick Stick has, I'm sure he's noticed...
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Fixed.
That was a great summary Chif, thanks for that.
Glad to see Mr. Numbers on board now. Also, that's a really good pic at the end.
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Glad i made you smile.
Oh the awkwardness in the sleeping bag! LMAO!
That was a good chapter I like the stuff that was added in, but I do feel that there are things that are missing. Alguacil got a glass eye ommuning with the spirit in his gun in silver town shanty. And there was no notice of that spiritual event happening which sunrise noticed in the stream but just didn’t investigate I don’t think.
First sentence.... That is what we are isn't it..... dropped the extra"not"...…( i.e. we are wastelanders)
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Fixed.
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But it was fun.
Very cute picture! Even if Sunrise had a c section, i'm Sure she and nyota would have wonderful Children
So this is a side of Aguicil that I can agree with the rest of the team that does need to go. His sense of justice is quite flawed.
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That will take Time and Effort.
Oh hey, a Charger from L4D2, nice homage.
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I mean it is Fallout ;) You expect references to not show up? OH no, this place is L4D2 on crack using plants!
One of those weird anachronisms that the writers didn't account for. Tantamount to a pony saying "gimme a hand here".
A88 a sting operative? And he bungled the insert/gestalt operation? Hmm...
Sounds like a dead tree. ;D
This chapter's art is heart-stoppingly cute!
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I integrated the artwork into the printed books too; but yes Trees did an amazing job when she was working for us.
its suck a weird though that both sunrise and scopola are both 30 neither one feels like they are
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Scopola is around 30.
30 would be a nicety for Sunrise; a compliment even.
this kinda reminds me of https://derpibooru.org/images/2670325?q=comic%3Abig+mac%27s+hindquarter+pounder (warning: several pics of mangled and bent anthro boners)
It says you're horny! I'm horny! And Sunrise is currently waiting for parental approval.”
This line is priceless
Also, nice fan art
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You are most welcome for the smiles.
Also that's not fan art it's just from earlier in the book and wasn't finished until later.
Those are some nice rhymes from Chief, I liked those.
A slow-paced chapter, although the next one sounds like it's gonna be a doozy. There was a talk of what drives Al. Yes, he has not changed much since first we saw him, but he also didn't have an opportunity to doubt his motives. Quick Stitch is a case he could consider, but it strays way off from what would make Al doubt. Quick Stitch has never considered himself a raider afterall. The second part of the chapter was the mutual teasing of our love doves. As much as I share an opinion with Pink, it is interesting to see something so unique. Waiting for the affirmation from her parents seems silly, they most likely are 200 year old, rotting bones buried under a layer of mud.
Best typo of the chapter goes for:
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The one thing here I will comment on:
What is going on with Sunrise's age is nothing as it seems, neither is the status of her parents. It's more extensional horror than you give it credit for.