Wandering Sunrise remembers Equestria as it once was: a land of harmony, broken by strife. She was sealed in a Stable-Tec stasis pod the day the Megaspells hit... and she wakes up in a pool of water, surrounded by strangers.
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Hm good chapter. But realy why did you take that Filly Scout. I mean can you trust a drug pushing pony. But realy it nice to see the group back on the road again. Can not wait to see what happens next.
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There are gonna be so many things wrong with that pony.
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Good!
good read, and nothing stood out as a mistake, gg
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Wow I guess Mr Numbers earned his Kudos!
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ayup
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are they good or bad horse noises?
Well, the party is in da shit now! surrounded and in a hostile situation!
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And we're already halfway through the next chapter edits. Expect it next week!
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I agree which one is it?
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I recall things will get crazy and Scopola Mina may regret her desire to go out adventuring with what the party has to deal with. Pretty scary place for an Oasis.
Spelling hit? Scolopa Mina......as it's spelled in the text.... should it be Scopola Mina? I.E. scopolamine?
Fun reading so far!
Casings at...... missed the space.....
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New Editor may have changed those, I'll let him know and I've fixed all of them.
I'd fly "if" I thought it was safe...
Grocery store.....
Still going..
Oh dear! Looks like fun times with a cliff hanger. Keep up the good work!
Things can only end badly in a place like this. I’m quickly coming to dislike jackal though. He was more fun as that fun asshole background character now he’s here and he’s just a asshole.
Now that I’ve watched the stream version I kinda feel that this was too short and lacked details from sunrise that she had in he stream. Like stitch’s demon spawn hasn’t even been mentioned not to mention the nugget cookie thing.
Creative password indeed.
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Oh it will be mentioned and remember only stuff Sunrise is present for gets mentioned here.
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OH yeah! He's suppose to seem irredeemable.
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Spaceballs reference.
Nice ending, just when I thought things were going ridiculously smooth.
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Just when you believed they were only being paranoid!
I don't feel like commenting anymore. After Three Mares and a Bomb I read chapter 34 of Project Horizons, then I read 13 more. I decide to come back here, since I am in a reading mood and want to get on with it. The first paragraph has a mistake. Reading through this chapter makes me appreciate how spotless PH is. Here, I keep getting confused by the descriptions and bored during unnecessary explanations. It is unfair, comparing this to PH, which I read, listened to and read again.
This is as aggressively linear as it can possibly be. And don't get me started on the fluff.
I am pulling all stops, it is so hard to get through just one chapter. PH is filled with fluff too, but that at least has interesting characters. Their interactions tie in with established facts, expanding on them and giving hints for the future. Here I don't feel anything exists beyond the surface level.
Sparrow acts like a completely different character. 'Wasteland justice's, what the hell is she talking about? We get no dis on what Jackal did, besides destroying a bed, to earn a bullet in the head.
Jackal mentions nothing about the super dangerous location he is leading them into and Nyota eats the fucking grass. Is he being stupid on purpose? It is such a forced setup. The book being a reflection of the tabletop game doesn't give it any excuses to be this flat.
I either was going to rant this out or stay silent. There are no stakes. The status quo is reversible 95% something happens. We are not burning any bridges. There is always a way back to how things were.
There are events in Dead Tree considered interesting, but they are held together by a single strip of gray duck tape.
It's gonna be a while until I read the next chapter.
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I feel like this is coming from a place of hurt more than anything.
I understand.
Good Luck and I hope you find something that makes you happy.
Your opinion of Project Horizons places it onto a pedestal it did not earn and feels like nostalgia baiting or rose tinted glasses. However this isn't something I can fix or help with; no one can except you.
I will also remind you that Somber knew about 3 mares and a Bomb, read it, left commentary and corrections; then signed off on it Prior to Ciderfest. He said it was within his guidelines for his character and that moment.
Sorry to say but if you still feel this way about it, then it's you, all you. Even the author of the work you are "defending" said he approved of the work you are lamenting.
Again, this sounds like "Death of the Author" more than anything.
Sounds like the kind of combination Flim and Flam would have on their luggage
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You're absolutely right!