A strange mechanical being awakens in a forest, with no idea how he got there or how to get back. His mind is a jumble of memories and sensations. He has memories of being something completely different yet has no memories of his current body. He wanders the land, meets new people, and searches for who he was. Along the way, he runs into threats that show just what a Rahkshi of Sonics can do to a body.
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Set in the Chess Game of the Gods universe. I do not own Bionicle, Rahkshi or anything of the like. I shouldn't have to include My Little Pony as I am on a fan fiction site for it.
Chapters (5)
Hmm, giant spiked metal monstrosity with a deadly looking weapon, acting quite dapper and well-natured in a land of innocent pastel ponies.
Seems Legit.
I'll admit, I'm curious as to where it goes from here; my interest is piqued!
bionicle?
Ohhh yes. We need more Bionicle crossovers, those are awesome. Not even mentioning that the Rahkshi are quite possibly the coolest bamfs of Bionicle.
The only thing that irks me is that fully organic entities like ponies should be pants-wettingly fucking TERRIFYING to the Rahkshi (or at least freak him out greatly)... I remember reading that some Makuta (who, iirc are actually already very powerful beings) went completely INSANE at the sight of Tren Krom, the only fully organic being of the Bionicle universe...
no bad think ill read on a little more
Hmm... Interesting that he doesn't retain at least some of the Rahkshi's destructive instincts...And I can't help but wonder if Vezon had something to do with this.
Interesting. It sounds as if a Makuta is blocking those memories, but all of them are dead (excluding Miserix and Alternate Teridax). I want to see how this turns out.
Asum chapter! although i do not know where the character is from i am still enjoying this very much!
Faved because Bionicle.... fragile meatbags.
Asum! i was just wondering though why dont you upload more often/longer chapters?
1161597 Because I'm lazy. I only write when I feel like.
This was difficult for me to read, because Rahkshi are monsters. At least, under the control of a Makuta.
1161843 This is set in the Chess Game of the Gods universe. Derahk is a human turned Rahkshi; it would make sense if he still had some of his humanity left.
1161677 Fair enough. Me personally im a dark kind of person, ive thought of more... creative ways to get rid of dem onix bandits if you know what i mean
to be honest i was kinda surprised at the reaction of Magic. he did save them from imminent death and it wasnt (in my opinion) all that horrible.
1161959 He disabled all the others without killing them; he didn't need to kill Silver, but he did. I'm also going with the assumption that most ponies are not used to intelligent creatures killing each other. I'll explain it more in a later chapter.
wait, so he saves their lives and is somehow the bad guy?
1161959>>1179981 I decided to change the fight scene around. One death didn't seem enough, so I put more in. I don't like senseless violence, but Derahk technically is a monster so I had to do something that shows that a little more.
nice story
Ponies you assholes
3190110 Huh?
This is good. More please
5180373 Not sure if you noticed, but the story is cancelled.
5180515 oh...
sorry.
I didnt notice...
5180515 bloody shame
I wish this wasn't cancelled. It had such a good start. And is also very good through and through.
Why did you cancel it?
Nice. I was recently thinking of doing a Rahkshi-based Displaced story myself, and then I suddenly find this story. Awesome.
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Shame about this being cancelled... I definitely would've liked to have been able to do a crossover between this story and one of my own, which has a human who is Displaced as a Toa. I must say, though, that your story was rather well written, and had a nice storyline, at least by my standards.