Written Letters

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Kyuubi16

Kyuubi16 #1 · Nov 15th, 2017 · 2 · ·

The being in love and the sex was far too fast-paced. There was no time for anything to develop in a meaningful way.

ChudoJogurt

ChudoJogurt #2 · Nov 15th, 2017 · 5 · ·

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Brony-wan-kenobi

Brony-wan-kenobi #3 · Nov 15th, 2017 · 1 · ·

As a quick clop story it does what it needs to. We get the idea that they have been writing to each other for a while now so there is so build up. However, I do wish they both could have been a bit more awkward since it's their first time

RainbowDeathClaw

RainbowDeathClaw #4 · Nov 15th, 2017 · 2 · ·

"Don't dislike if you don't like the fic." Uuuuuhhh I don't you think understand the reason that the dislike button is there, its not to hate on creators, its so that people can see what most people think of your story.

The Abyss

The Abyss #5 · Nov 15th, 2017 · 3 · ·

Don't dislike if you don't like the fic. Please comment down below with constructive criticism so I may improve!

Just saying this will make people want to downvote it even more.

Also, why is there an apostrophe in the word Letters in the story title and the cover art? Letters is plural, not possessive.

Tank Drill

Tank Drill #6 · Nov 15th, 2017 · 3 · ·

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I fixed the title and I've removed that sentence. Thanks for that, I appreciate it. Also, you think they should add a Tempest Emoji to FimFiction?

8552087
Well, it is a shameless clopfic.

8552422
Eh, it's been awhile since I published a One Shot.

8552504
That's what I've been struggling with, but I decided to put the effort that he wanted to change himself from being awkward and stuttering to what he is in the fic.

8552556
I could have worded that better because a lot of people have been disliking the story without reason. I REALLY want to improve my writing, but it's difficult. I've read guides, including what The Abyss has given us through the blog, but it's not helping me. So I hope you understand what I'm going through. Plus I've been scraping a lot of potential ideas that just don't come through.