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EStar Tracker Joins Twilight’s School Of Friendship
MLP: FiM
Romance
Drama
Slice of Life
Star Tracker wants to attend the School Of Friendship.
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Star Tracker
Lonely Fanboy48 · 2.7k words · 16 9 · 1.4k views

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Kiss Of Princess Gesture

Star Tracker made the right choice of defending Twilight from Iron Will. So Twilight decides to give him something she never did to anypony.

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Comment posted by DAMN HAMSTER deleted Nov 8th, 2018

Rockstar_Raccoon

Rockstar_Raccoon #2 · Nov 9th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Interesting idea, not bad execution either. I'd suggest that you think harder about it next time, and try to delve a little deeper into it: this felt rushed. Alternatively, this felt very bite-sized, so the rushing might not have been so bad, aside from the fact that it feels a bit unfocused.

Anyway, those are my thoughts.

Lonely Fanboy48

Lonely Fanboy48 #3 · Nov 9th, 2018 · 3 · 3 ·

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Sorry after watching the episode, I thought of an idea and after that the sequels will be more focussed.

Discord The Narrator

Discord The Narrator #4 · Nov 9th, 2018 · 1 · 1 ·

What exactly did DAMN HAMSTER wrote on that deleted comment? Just curious.

Comment posted by Lonely Fanboy48 deleted Apr 23rd, 2019

Discord The Narrator

Discord The Narrator #6 · Nov 9th, 2018 · 2 · 2 ·

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Nice! The troll got trolled.

MixMassBasher #7 · Nov 9th, 2018 · · ·

This story was a bite sized episode aftermath. Something to read to pass the time.

Still needs some edits as I still spotted a couple of errors.

RainbowThunder #8 · Nov 17th, 2018 · 2 · 2 ·

This is my favourite story :)

Pete100

Pete100 #9 · Oct 26th, 2020 · · ·

My man scored.

LightningboltOfAlipsea

LightningboltOfAlipsea #10 · Oct 7th, 2023 · · ·

Haha I like it

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