• Member Since 11th May, 2016
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Queen Zenith


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For a second there, I thought this was another one of those 'Take character A and put into plot B' cliche. Good to see it wasn't the case.

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lol does that happen a lot?

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Alot. And its either taking a plot from one world and throwing into the another, or character A takes on character Bs rules, like Twilight being Harry potter.

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I kinda don't understand that but eh they can write what ever they want.

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Basically what I'm saying is that its rather lazy writing to put a different character into another ones role, like if someone took the script of the harry potter book and replaced him with Twilight. Or taking the plot of Skyrim and making Rainbow Dash the Dragonborn and the rest follows EXACTLY like the Skyrim script.

8454820
The name does sound suspiciously like one of THOSE stories.

Comment posted by Queen Zenith deleted Oct 2nd, 2017

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maybe, but I really like the name. I didn't wanna change it.

First gift accepted. Wonder what the other two are...

flavored magic, a name, and....

Interesting. Like Tirek but not.
Keep going! ;)

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thanks, I will. I would have been writing but I've been really busy the last two weeks.

So sorry, my computer died and I just now got one. i plan on writing more so if you have enjoyed my story so far please forgive me for the sins of not writing more.

Hmm so she's been captured. But at least there's food!
Now what happened to that squirrel....
Keep going! ;)

plan on it, now that I have a computer again.

The creature stood before me a paper bag with colorful rocks in it.

Something sounds wrong here....

Chrysalis took a breath before answering his question, "Because Zenith means that it is the highest point one could reach." Her eyes softened before adding, "So if I had a daughter, she would be the highest point I could reach."

As you wish, queen Zenith.

Conditions?
Well, now she's bonded and insured, wearing the palette swapped form of a dignitary friend? Wonder what kind of labor he'd expect from a recovering changeling Queen...
Her squirrel friend might come in handy, as an intermediary for other woodland creatures.
Keep going! ;)

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I will, it's just that my job takes up a lot of my time right now.

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We can sympathize with that. Many a brony gets sucked back into real life like that...

Yes, callously assigning a relationship on the fly is a bad idea. But at the very least it's unverifiable, so there's that.
Banished, eh? We sense a moral conflict!
Further west is Ponyville, no? A magic ling encountering the Princess of magic would be interesting, if not entertaining. Discord's fun will have to wait.
Keep going! ;)

I found a map of equestria that i like, I've been using that, where she is located is much much farther then ponyville. I would post it but I don't know how.

Interesting, 20 years ago...
And then the interesting circumstances around her birth...
What game is he playing?
Keep going!;)

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