I write for fun xX and rememger to smile :)
"Let's go in there"
That's the last thing the Mane six heard Apple Bloom say before she went in the restaurant. Now the ponies have to go in and get her... before its too late.
They are locked in til 6 am when rescuers can get them out. Until then, they must survive the night. Can they do it?
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Plz no
8573576
O sorry you dont like? :
8573615
im sure i'll find out with time but why is there romance part of the tags?
8573615
Ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. It's oke
It's a good start, though I would have to complain about the few spelling errors. I'm also confused about whether the Mane Six and Apple Bloom are human, anthro or regular ponies, because you mentioned the pizzas had ham on them, but ponies don't eat meat. Ponies also pull carts or wagons, not drive cars.
8573796
Oh yeah I edited this one my self so I probanly missed a few. Its a AU where they're a more modern society, most of my stories are like that so old readers expect it but new ones don't :P thanks for the feedbacks~
8573644
Oh yeah yo'll find out soon enough dude ;)
8573968
alright but why are most of ytour stories have a red lightsaber you working for darthvader or something?
FNANF???
Five
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Freddy's
Also what did I just read?
Were the misspelled names purposeful?
8896852
nope sorry im not so good at editing :(
* second-degree black belt*
Karate goes higher than that. She could become a sensai if she wanted to, or she could train with higher degree people.
Rarity uses Darling. They're all out of character, and it's spelled, 'Rainbow Dash'
*Establishment
Woah Woah Woah. Does Twilight seem like the type to break into restaurants? I mean, just wait until morning? 'Did' need's to be lowercased, and you need to choose whether or not you want your story written in pre-tense or past-tense.