Five Nights At Ponies

by Xx soul sorrow xX

Night one

After karate practice, Apple Bloom stood outside the arena, waiting for her sister to get here. She was proud to announce that she was now a black belt 2 degrees now. It has taken her years, but she knew with the power of her cutie mark she could do it. Now she had to find a new hobby, and she had one in mind.

AJ pulled around the corner in her mom’s S.U.V. With the other mane six ponies in the back.

“Guys, I got my 2 degrees black belt!! Today is my last day of karate!''

The ponies squealed in proudness. Apple bloom got in the car and they lifted her like the Hebrews did. Apple Bloom blushed like a bright red apple from the vine.

“As promised, I will take you to Fredbear Fazbear’s Pizzeria.” Apple Jack said to the little horse.

“It’s kind of late, dude. Are you sure its open, bro?” Rainbow dash ask.

“Probablly,” Fluttershy said. “I went there late at night. Or maybe that was Cony Island...?”

The ponies laughed. They were on their way. The train started and they went.

§

Apple back pulled into Fazbear’s pizza and it was completely dark. Only one car was parked off to the side. They all hop out and frown when they sit it empty. Apple Bloom gets real mad real fast. She wanted to eat pizza and play a games and play with the ponies and meet the bear and friends, but it weren’t open. Apple Bloom kicked the dirt and got some in her karate shoes. Apple jack told her to stop because those were expensive and could later be sold on Ponylist.com.

“Sorry” Apple said then her sister patted her head.

Rarity checked her cell phone. She looked up Freddy Fabear Pizzas and said "it closes at 10pm, open Monday thru Friday” Rarity said.

“Oh maybe it was Coney Island I went to.” Fluttershy chuckled like a chip munk.

“UUGHH I’m sooo bored,” Applebloom said at them.

“Well, pumpkin we gotta wait til tomorrow since it’s Sunday and it ain’t open.” Applejack said.

Applebloom has an idea. She looked at her watch and saw that it was 12:010 AM.

“AppleJack! Look! It’s past midnight so it’s technically Monday!!” Twilight and Pinkie and the other Mane Six clapped their hooves at her discovery. But how do they get in there?

Twilight pointed her horn at the door “Luckily I know how to pick locks. Come on, gals.”

They gallop to the door and Twilight stick her horn in the lock and with some magic she picked the lock. Everyone watched while she Did it. Finally the lock break open. Twilight winked at everyone.

“Well YEEEHAWWW everypony! Three cheers for Twlight!!” said Apple yelled loud.

“Darling, I hope this eastablishment isn’t dirty and dingy. I don’t want it to get coture dirty.” said RANbow Darch

“Pssh I don’t care for a little dirt. I wanna get in,” Applejack say.

Applebloom used her head to pusch the door open just a tad. She cough quietly as possible.

“Wowee. It sure is dusty in here.”

Everyone slowly walk in. A bat flew over them and everyone gasped and Rarity screamed and Pinkie peed all over the floor.

“Come on girls. There’s nothing to fear. Let’s go get that Pizza!” Twilight said.

The girls said like YEUH! And they went.

“But Twiley, where do we go?” Fluttershy ask?

“Hmm, let’s split up. Me, Applebloom and Rainbow Dash will go together. Rarity and Pinkie Pip go together. Applejack and Fluttershy go together.”

“That’s a good idea, Twilight. Me and Ratity can be party pals!!!”

“You know what they say, a apple a day can keep the spookies away” said Applejack. She turned to Applejack and winked cause they were partners now.”

“Alright losers." said Rainbow with a clear throat like she had a frog. "My team will go look in the offices and kitchen. Apple and Flutters can go in the West Hall, the utility room and the bathrooms. Rarity and Pinkie can check the East Hall and the party room.” Rainbow Dach said.

“YEAH PONIES!” they all cheered like a pop soccer rally. They put their hoofs in together to do a cheer and then they split up in a jiff.

§

The groups all ran off to their Area of Interest except Apple and Fluttershy they stayed where they were.

“Well I ‘spose were already hear in the west hall. Maybe we will see a sign or poster to say where the pizza will be, ya hear?” Applejack said.

Fluttershy said “Okay....”

Fluttershy didnt really like pizza because she was vegan but she liked Hawiyan pizza with the pineapple but not ham and not the cheese. Just the bread and the fruit That's It. Maybe they have it...? Fluttershy didnt want to tell Applejack she was scarred to go through the Freddy Fazbear cause Apples might make fun of her but Apple was a strong woman so she knew that with A-Jacks she would be protected.

“Alright, corn crop. Let’s git a move on.”

Applejack walked on the right side and Flittershy walked on the left. The walls had stains and dirt and bugs. The floors were covered with checker tiles and dust bunnies. On the walls were drawings but no signs.

“Umm Apple...." said Flutershy with a nervous. "I don’t see a sign and we’ve been walking a awfully long time....”

“I done noticed that too, Flutterbug. What do you supoose these spooky drawings are for? And why are there so Many?”

" I don’t know, Ajacks... Look at this one...”

Applejjack trotted to the wall and saw it. Fluttershy ripped it off the wall with her teeth and held it for Applejack. The drawling had a chicken woman with a baby bib and a purple rabbit. And There was foals bleeding in it.

“For the love of moonshine what is THAT!” Applejack screeched was startled.

Fluttershy drop the picture. “I don’t know. It’s really un-settling.”

Applejack adjust her cowboy hat and wiped a sweat drip from her forehead. She walked along the wall with Flutt some more and saw more drawings. One drawing had a teddy bear man with happy foals. One had a fox with a hook hand. She knew they were Fredbare Fazbear and Chica, Bonny, and Foxy. But she came to one that was a black and white tall puppet. Another had a boy with a baloon and a yellow bear. Apejack had only been to this place once when she was a kiddie. She vagely remembered the way around or the characters in the picts. Applejack looked at Fluttershy and saw she was crying and shivering. Apple decided not to say anything to her at all because maybe she was mad.

After walking fo a long time, Fluttershy said, "Let’s go back before we get Lost". Then they turn and galloped real fast to the start. They turned around at 2AM. It would take for ever to get back they knew.

§

Twilight and Rainbow along with Applebloom went to the security office. It was locked just like the front doors but after some specialty pickin’ from Twi Twi, the door sqeeked open and they went in. Applebloom must have been allergic to dusts because she coughed even more and her eyes watered.

Twilight grabbed a glass of water off the office desks and give it to him. The watter had dust in it but Lil Apple drank it all and thanked her. Twight was like a big sister to Applebloom. She was glad to have put her in her group. Rainbow Dalsh flew around and examined the wares in the joint. She found some ugly rats and a bug with little leggies. And she found more glasses of water for Applebloom if she coughed. There was a mini fridge but it wasn’t plugged in and the food inside was old and not good. It was mostly celery and carrot. And a jar of mayonase with "Frank W" wrote on the label.

“Hey who unplugged these fridge??” Rainbow asks.

“I’m not sure, Rainboo Dash.” apple said like a flirt.

Applebloom looked behind the fridge and followed the cord around the room and on top of a cabinet. Twilight looked around at the desk. There were papers and a quill with ink everywhere. It spill every ware.

“Hmmmmm” she thought.

She looked at a paper. It was a newspaper and she looked at it harder. The title was said “Freddy Bear’s Pizzarea Under Investigating”. Her eyeballs grew.

November 11, 2568

Written by Quincy Quills

Famous restaurnt Freddy Fazbear’s pizza is under investigation! Five foals got murdered and stuffed into the suits of the animamtronic. Police are investigating and finding the murderer soon. Beware, and watch your kids and keep them SAFE.

Twilight gulped in some phlem when she read it. She looked at another paper that was a letter. It was from a pony named Shiny Badge.

To Markova Fazmare

Mrs. Fazmare I dounno what you are playing at here, but I won’t put up with it. These robos are going crazy. They are biting me and my kids and the kids that eat pizza here and the pizza and the other workers. This is insanitaty!! I call the cops already and they are planning an investigatian. Oh.. By the way... I QUIT.

Former Security Gourd Shiny Badge

Applebloom call from the top of the cabinet. She went up there herself because Rainbow Das told her she wouldnt go up there and look herself.

“Guys! I found the outlet. Somepony unplugged the fridgerater so plug something else in. It leads down there. If I can get down, I can look for it.” Applebloom said.

Rainboi was sitting against the wall and Twilight got up and followed the other cord. It leaded all the way to the desk and connected to a moniter. Twilight booped the button on the moniter with her snout and it turn on and made a light buzz sound. They all said "Woooahhh." Raibow flew to the moniter and stare at the closely to see what it was. It was the building they were in!! She saw the party room with Rarity and Pinkie looking at the robot guys. It made Twilight curious to see what they would find later. She wished she could see the robots. They tried looking in the Kitchen Cam for pizza but it was all static.

“Dang it. Looks like we gotta go in the if we want to see if pizza is there.” Applebloom said form the cabnit. She was bored and drew pictures of her and Twiligt in the dust on top of the cabinet.

Twilight was gettin’ shaky with anxious. She couldn’t stop thinking about the papers. She saw another one on the floor. It said;

If you are reading this, I will be hiding in the cabinet and locking it. The key is in the drawer under the moniter. The robots are coming. Somepony please let me ou

The rest of the note was covered in the spill Ink. Twilight looked at the cabinet Applebloon was sitting on and shivered. She didn’t want to open the cabinet in case it was a crazy guy hiding up on in there. Rainbowe Dash growled and she angry.

“I can’t see anythong with this stupid static!” Rainbow punch the moniter and it switch to the west hall camera. Applejack and Fluttershy were running down the hall scared and screaming.

“Oh no!! We have to go!” So Rainboe and Twilight ran out of the office. Applebloom get left behind and she cried and screamed “WAIT, DON’T LEAVE ME! TWILIGHT, RAINBOW, PLEASE SAVE ME!”

But when she scream they thought it was the robot getting her and they run faster but she was only stuck on the cabinet. Twilight and the other kept running til they get to the front to meet Appleback and Fluttershy.

§

Pinkie and Rarity had made their way down the East hall easy and got to the party room no probs.

“Pinkie Pie, where do we begin?? I want to find this pizza ASAP and you’re the number one party pone I know.”

“Well, Rarity. When I eat a pizza party, I drop some onto the floor. Maybe it on the floor in a box or plate if we’re lucky.”

They walk around and find a few bites on the floor and snack on those. But it was not sanisfactory. The pizza was like a dream flavor so good. But they needed for more. The hunger grew thirsty for more.

“Pinkie that was not enough. We need more pizza.” said Rarity aggresive.

But Pinkie was looking somewhere else. She was by the stage looking at the animal guys.

“Pinkie what are you doing, darling love??”

Pink jump up and down like a danish dipper. “Rarity look it’s Freddy and the guys!!”

Rarit went here all the time as a kiddle and she loved the animal charters. Rarity secretely had a crush on the fox one. She didn’t see him though.

Rarity go up to the robots too. She had a rough time getting pass the tables and plastic chairs and not slip on a hoagie but she trip anyway and Pinkie laughed :(

Rarity and Pinkie examine them. Their fur was dirty and had a bit-o-blood. Pinkie touch the fur with her hook and sniff it. It was like a mix of sweat and tortilla mini bites. Pinkie lick her lippies. Rarity thought she was a goof.

Rarity took the head off the bear and put it on.

“Look Pinkie Pie I’m Freddie! BBAAAOUHGGHHH”

Pinkie Pie clopped her heels and scream and peed on the floor again because she has a bladder infection. They laughed like old pals and hugged.

They grab cups of Fruity Cola leftover on the tabels and drink up and “shoot the sticks” (not gonna use the s word sorry) as they say which really means they talked about anything.

Just then they hear a shift sound like FFPPT. Rariby turns and thinks it’s nothing but Pinkie keeps watching while Rarity keeps talking about babies and Pinkie sees the purple bunny Bonny move his ankle. She scream and run and Rarity followed.

“Pinkie why do you run from me?!”

“I saw the bunny Bonny move!!”

They keep going and going and get to the front. There they see everyone there panting and sweating up a storm and Fluttershy is sobbing loudly. Rarity looks around and doesn’t see Abblebloom.

“Applejack where is your little sister?”

“I don’t know... She was with Twilight and Raindow Dads.”

Eevrypony looked at Twilight who is still licking sweat droblets from her lip and fixing her hairs.

“She’s......... Gone.”

Everyone gasped and Rarity begins crying softly. Applejack approaches and comforts her.

“I know your sad, Rairy. But we’re gonna be A.O.K. We gonna find her. We gonna get her back home when the chance comes, toaster stroodle."

Rarity wipes her tears. She was so close to Applebloom but had to have hope.

“Ladies, we must return tomorrow and find Applebloom after closing time. Only then will we see what happned. We will solve it. We Can Do It.”

They all hug except Twilight, who waltzes away with her head down, upset at her choice.

Comments

[Dundundun]

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Ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. It's oke

[Fizzyberries302]

It's a good start, though I would have to complain about the few spelling errors. I'm also confused about whether the Mane Six and Apple Bloom are human, anthro or regular ponies, because you mentioned the pizzas had ham on them, but ponies don't eat meat. Ponies also pull carts or wagons, not drive cars.

[Xx soul sorrow xX]

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Oh yeah I edited this one my self so I probanly missed a few. Its a AU where they're a more modern society, most of my stories are like that so old readers expect it but new ones don't :P thanks for the feedbacks~

[Sephocolys]

After karate practice, Apple Bloom stood outside the arena, waiting for her sister to get here. She was proud to announce that she was now a black belt 2 degrees now. It has taken her years, but she knew with the power of her cutie mark she could do it. Now she had to find a new hobby, and she had one in mind.

* second-degree black belt*

Karate goes higher than that. She could become a sensai if she wanted to, or she could train with higher degree people.

[Sephocolys]

“Darling, I hope this eastablishment isn’t dirty and dingy. I don’t want it to get coture dirty.” said RANbow Darch

Rarity uses Darling. They're all out of character, and it's spelled, 'Rainbow Dash'
*Establishment

Applebloom has an idea. She looked at her watch and saw that it was 12:010 AM.

“AppleJack! Look! It’s past midnight so it’s technically Monday!!” Twilight and Pinkie and the other Mane Six clapped their hooves at her discovery. But how do they get in there?

Twilight pointed her horn at the door “Luckily I know how to pick locks. Come on, gals.”

They gallop to the door and Twilight stick her horn in the lock and with some magic she picked the lock. Everyone watched while she Did it. Finally the lock break open. Twilight winked at everyone.

“Well YEEEHAWWW everypony! Three cheers for Twlight!!” said Apple yelled loud.

Woah Woah Woah. Does Twilight seem like the type to break into restaurants? I mean, just wait until morning? 'Did' need's to be lowercased, and you need to choose whether or not you want your story written in pre-tense or past-tense.