Rainbow Dash is trapped in an alternate dimension.
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Originally written for The WriteOff Association's Distant Shores contest.
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I think you mean 'deserts' in this instance, but it's a mistake I make as well.
Anyway, I remember reading this long ago, so it's nice to see a version of this story up on FiMFiction. It's still quite the story if I recall correctly, and everything else seems to be in order. And best of luck on your future writing projects!
6845481 Fixed.
I'm still reworking the rest, but it shouldn't take long to get the rest of it uploaded.
6845491 Sounds fair to me. And no worries, as typos happen from time to time.
Oh, I remember this one. Your word choice is a bit iffy at times, but I still look forward to seeing the rest.
Well this is interesting, I like Dash's lack of flying as it could mean any number of different things about this desert world. Not the least frightening of which being a lack of magic preventing Dashie's wings from being strong enough. Still, I am interested in seeing where this goes.
I'll see you at the next chapter.
This seems rather interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next. ^^
6845611 Iffy? As in unusual? Or not a great choice of words? I think one of the major criticisms I got for this story was "bland prose."
6845746 You are kinda sorta onto something there... or are you?
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Not quite the right word at times. For example, Dash's hunch about not being in Equestria isn't what I would call shrewd.
6847749 Hmmm. How about nagging suspicion or 'suspected she wasn't in Equestria anymore'?
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Either would work just fine.
Yeesh, those things look scary! This is nicely written - I can't wait for the next one. ^^
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Thanks.
6847275 I don't care I want to read the rest instead of having it all spoiled. Just call my stuff wild speculations. Like the fake sequel to "Cupcakes" I made up for the short story I just finished. It's a Pinkie Pie ship fic so she's allowed to reference "Cupcakes" as part of a joke. You want to preread it?
Oh also hooray for more chapters! I will read them now.
I like Swift. Seems like a pretty cool horse. I'll see you at the next exciting chapter.
6848729 Wild speculations are what they are...
Of course I do. It's been a while since I've done any proofreading. PM moi, s'il vous plaît.
6848844 It's been a while since I finished writing something.
Telepathic desert horses. Hardly the strangest thing with which I've seen Rainbow Dash shipped.
"Phantoms," I assume.