Put Blitz into Blitzkrieg and You Won't Break Us!
Set on January 8th, 1988.The Main seven are teleported to one of the history's last stands when they go through the mirror for studying the Human world, but things take a turn for the worse.
I'm thinking on doing another one but maybe in Stalingrad, if this story goes well and this is my first story (Inspired by the story Battle of Agincourt by dominatusimperator) and edited by Cerber
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A good start for your first story.
8544253
I knew someone was going to do that
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Thanks,it took some time to fix and add
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Your're welcome. Say are you familiar with the Metal Gear series?
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Yep,i played a couple of them
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Okay. Just thought it could interest you that Metal gear 5, set in 1984, has some missions set in Afganistan against the Soviets
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I know i have the MSG V, its awesome
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Agreed but some missions are really hard if you want to get an S rank or do all missions tasks, not to mention the skulls
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Yeah,the skulls it took a while for too come with tactics for dealing with them
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Agreed.
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Also there is a reference in this
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I have to look after this.
Not bad. A bit rushed however, and you should work on punctuation. Captalize your 'I' s when a character refers to themselves,("I should throw them a party") and at the start of a sentence.("Well whatever they are...")
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Yeah,im a bit of a new writer. Sorry if it feels a bit rushed i will correct this
I can edit this for you.
Send me a PM if interested
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Thank you
Needs a fair bit of editing, but pretty good, if not a little short
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Thank you and the story has been edited
Твою мать!
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Привет, товарищ
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Помнил, что долго назад, ты вышел за мной и забыл эту историю читать.
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Вы имеете в виду мою историю или свою историю?
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Dang you beat me too it.
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Were you planning on doing this battle?
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I’m not a writer sorry, I was about to post a link to the song.
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Oooh ok
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