Bullet magizines and clips aren’t the same the thing. Mags hold the bullets in a protective barrier and clips can act as speedloaders with no protective cover for Bolt action rifles or speed loaders for magazines. And from I’m told from Granpa (who also was a rifleman who carried a M1 they didn’t give Clips they gave him Mags. Sorry to come off as nitpicking.

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No it's fine I can take it you proved some good points and have done some research which I thank you for but this is not a perfect story but making it a perfect story will be a challenge and I accept that challenge. But these in my opinion are the steps to make it perfect.
1. Improve writing skills and formatting which is now done but there's always more room for improvement.
2. Make the story more appealing to the audience.
3. More character development and background information about them.
4. Fix the problem of my Google docs not working so an editor can edit my story.
5. Make the lore more evident.
6. Research more about guns and the workings of guns so I can be more accurate with my details in the story.
7. Have more struggle for each character in the story.
8. Have longer chapters but this will be difficult due to the limited time I have each day or my laziness comes back.
9. Not make main characters overpowered.
10. Plan out the story's before writing them
11. Reach out and ask for help from time to time mainly because I am pretty stubborn when it comes to writing my story's.
12. Make sure that everything is going to be alright and that the story is not sunshine and rainbows but make it reality.
13. Be more detailed of the soundings around the characters.
14. Make conflicting situations for the characters and have a good or bad outcome and how that will affect them and the people or world around them.
Now then feel free to add to this list on this story or my main page when you click on my username. I can take criticism and take that advice and put it to work so don't think that I will ignore you or use the advice you gave me I will use it and put it to good use.