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Twilight--Paladin


Just your average memster/author. Also starting off as an artist. [Pronouns: she/her]

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Happy was just living his everyday life at home when IT happened. He was terrified. Now, he has to experience what he never wanted to see.

You follow Happy Moon on his journey through the Equestrian Wasteland as he both new friends and new enemies.

Note 1: This . So I would love to know how I can make it better, but please do so politely. I recommend having at least basic knowledge of the plots of the game "Fallout 4" and the story "Fallout: Equestria" to properly enjoy this story. Enjoy!

"Fallout: Equestria" by Kkat: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/119190/fallout-equestria

"Fallout 4" on Steam: http://store.steampowered.com/app/377160/Fallout_4/

Note 2: I'm dropping a few references here and there. See if you can find them all!

Note 3: Special thanks to these people for these reasons:
Kkat for letting me use Littlepip: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/10369/Kkat
Somber for letting me use Blackjack: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/17398/Somber
Mimezinga for letting me use Puppysmiles: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/724/mimezinga

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

Seems interesting so far

8802389
Thanks, and you'll LOVE chapter 1.

Alternative Universe? Twilight isn't Ministry Mare, in that case no super alicorns... and no Blackjack, who is Twilight's descendant o.O

8810856
I wasn't aware that Blackjack was Twilight's descendant, though I was planning on having Littlepip be a descendant of Applejack. Also, Twilight is still the founder of the Ministry of Arcane Sciences. This is basically a refresh of the Fallout: Equestria timeline.

8811117
there is a trick to keep track of facts - creating character cards for evryone. we have helf from foe wiki, most fact about central characters are already there.

Wow I love this so far i cant wait till chapter to and the rest of it. and one question why do you have foals with twighlight?
I really cant wait!!

9167530
Thanks! Also, Happy was the one who adopted Sharp and Silver.

This is an interesting idea, can’t say where this is gonna go as most of what has transpired yet is basically Fallout 4, except the two kids instead of one. Can’t help but wonder how this fits into the FO:E timeline, with Twi getting into the stable safe and sound. Apparently there’s gonna be no Goddess and such. Anyway, I’ll wait for what the next chapters might bring.

As for grammar and such, I mostly noticed the recurring issue of some improper use of punctuation in direct speech. Can explain more, if you wish.

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