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Well, that was dark and gory ... I love it!
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No!!! Why would you put the ending in the comments? awww man. Please don't be upset that I deleted the comment to avoid spoilers for others
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Sorry, I wasn't thinking. I just wanted an answer.
Oh right!
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No worries. To be honest, I wasn't sure where it was going until Rarity revealed to me what she intended on doing. Once I figured it out, I went back and tailored ( ha ah aha get it?) the story so it reflected on her end goal. And with her being who she is, I figured that result would be an ultimate manifestation of her 'love'. :D Also, it was different than what some people expected, so that was awesome. Yay for crazy yandere love.
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Yay.
So I guess there is gonna be an epilogue? I'll wait before giving my thumbs to this fic
This is amazing, it's like Rarity's own version of Cupcakes. 10/10
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Well, the Rarity and Spike story arc is done. If you all like my grim dark style, the black flame can come back. :-)
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Thank you for your appreciation!
The moment I read that,I was horrified! Rarity wasn't only going to kill rainbow dash, she was killing rainbow dash's unborn foal as well!
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As soon as I wrote what Pinkie had done to RD as a prank earlier in the story, I couldn't help but see that as an option. It is quite horrific, and I felt a little bad for subjecting our sweet ponies to such yadere-like fates.
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Please don't be mad, but I'm deleting your comment because it gives a spoiler to the story.
Before I read this, what is the Gore, Horror and Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?
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I sent you a private message :-)
i think you went to far and that turned me off from the story
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Thanks for your feedback. I'm sorry you didn't like the story. I made sure to list it as gory and mature because the story went so far on the dark and depraved spectrum. I'd love to get a private message and hear where you felt I went too far on, so I can modify my future writings, should I decide to go dark like this again.
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Um... thanks? Lol so did you like it?
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I liked it but I don't really have the stomach for gore but still , very well written
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Thank you very much!!! I appreciate that you enjoyed it.
It was well written for a gorey story, but some of the scenes were a bit much...also, Spike was turned into clothes really quickly...I guess that was what the grunts were about...
Also: "Rainbow Dash groaned. “That Pinkie Pie…. She’s gone too far this time. I’m…” Rainbow rolled her eyes. “I’m freakin’ pregnant. This is so uncool. It’s going to severely hamper my cloud clearing time averages.”"
Whut? Is this lewd pinkiedash or was dash forced by pinkie to have a kid with a stallion?
Anyway, it's a bit too gorey for me, but good mature fic.
Also, I would have ended this by having Spike's ghost find the shadow demon to get things back to normal, even if he had to give up his soul...or at least realize it was definitely his fault, repent, have one chance to contact the princess, or undo what he had done, even if he died in the same Also. At least Fluttershy serviced. Finally, I would have liked to see the pets and towns ponies realize that the three girls were gone; and Rarity get in trouble and have to outrun the law or something. Maybe as a sequel or side story?
LOL, anyway, not bad!
Good theme, be careful what you wish for. Though it's too cruel a play of events for my tastes so I dont feel like giving this a thumbs up. Still like the theme though.
as soon as he said ' I wish for rarity to be MADLY in love with me' at that moment I knew he had fucked up.
Need to be specfic with wishing for things, even one word off can screw you over.
I hope Rarity is prepared for Celestia's wrath when she finds out this happened.
As a Spike fan, my response to the end is perfectly natural
: I almost vomited and got nightmares for days.
Also, I don't wanna sound sadistic, but I feel like I wanna see an illustration of the dress & headpiece. I think it's to get some sort of closure from my nightmares.
But that aside, this was a nice, grimdark story.