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Lichlord18
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Not a bad take. Kind of interesting to see a take on depression like this.
Nice fic, I was looking for quite some time to read about a character like this.
*You're
8172253 Fixed! And thank's for spotting that!
It's scary just how accurate that is. For years I was that guy. You know the one. The guy that hated life, just because as soon as something went right, EVERYTHING ELSE WENT HORRIBLY WRONG.
It's a pretty good take, yeah.
But I'm curious, why did you add this to the submissions folder for the Good HiE list? It seems pretty early in its life to be throwing it up on there.
Minor errors here and there, a few weird clauses, but overall, pretty good writing:
Sugarcube.
Break. Second sentence is a bit strange.
Sugarcube.
Some people don't view that as an error, but seeing a randomly capitalized 'I' without an apostrophe irks me a bit.
I like both stories quite nice to see 2 different sides of the same start
:O
I would like to see a sequel from this as well, as a continuation of how Pinkie fails and begins to trail off from Anon.
I know it sounds depressing, but I find both sides of the story quite appealing, if you don't mind me stating.
Keep up the good work.
wonder why people are downvoting this story?
I don't get it.
This isn't too bad. A less angsty kind of preference to solitude would have been better than "I don't want to be happy because then I can potentially be sad at some future time" though. Some people are just naturally anti-social and gain nothing but irritation and boredom from socializing with others. They would much rather spend their time doing their own thing alone.
I loved this. It does not relate directly to me, but it is definitively close enough.
This could definitely use a sequel series to display the war of attrition at play here. Even Pinkie can only be so stubborn before it impacts her life, and then the lives of others. No sweeter vindication is this: than to be an effective but safe life lesson to those who would never know better until it is too late, and let that be ones own contribution to society.
Men, I just can't look at this without thinking it's angsty and edgy.
Sorry.