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Lichlord18
just a guy from Vegas, that moved to California and likes fanfiction
Lichlord18
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starting out really nice cant wait for the rest ^^
This could be good
Nice opening chapter hope their is more to come
Interested to see where this goes
maaaaybe try for another name?
'Pitch Black' feels like the 'black and red alicorn OC' equivalent for evil names.
7760506 That's why it's okay, he's not evil. As such it doesn't count.
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I though Lichlord18 was going to go with dark horizon or something meaning a gray area or necessary evil.
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you're sure not waiting to use that dark
7761803 Bad things are going to happen. Little Pitch's life will not have a happy beginning, though it might have a happy ending... not to mention, you know, shambling corpses and stuff...
7761903 what do you think of the name of dark horizon? would you use it in your story?
7762088 Maybe, but probably not for a main character.
Hello my honey...
Yes! Thanks for writing this story!
Hope we will get a nice grey protagonist.
I think you should have the characters interact more BEFORE you throw the big plot twist at us
7768753 All of the characters so far are minor ones, meant to help establish the main char. and provide a small amount of conflict at the beginning.
My one and only question is why did they take him to the dungeon?
7775302 It was the only quiet and safe place they could find quickly, they would have left him in the sewer but the guards were already looking down there.
His introvert game is weak. My sociology professor doesn't know what my voice sounds like, nor does anyone else in the class.
Get brood, scrub.
So... I take it we're going with a modified ruleset for this Equestria. Y'know, since canon cutiemarks can't be earned without an epiphany on the subject... even if you don't quite realize that it was that realization in particular. Moreover, they've kinda pounded it home that a pony's cutiemark is invariably something they realized they enjoyed prior to the mark's emergence.
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two words Troubleshoes Clyde.
7764191 Hello my ragtime, summertime gal
Just went ahead and added you to Nercomancy group :)
I like it, and I really look forward to whatever you've got planned next.
Need new chapter. It has been a year
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...You do realize that not only has this been on hiatus for about a year, but I just started a rewrite yesterday, right?
A bit heavy with narration and a little to fast paced on the dialogue side, but other than that, it seems promising.
It's awesome that this story is back! I can't wait for what you have in store me!
love this story
I'm having the weirdest sense of Déjà vu right now.
“more different” just doesn't sound right there.
Hoping for a Groger reference and/or plotpoint.
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If I remember correctly, this chapter is a rewrite of and older version that rushed through his childhood, the incident where he raised a entire classroom of dead frogs, they dragged him off to the catacombs under Canterlot, he meets a friendly ghost, they steal a book on necromancy from the Royal Library's restricted section, and spook Twilight in the process. Given that all of that happened in one roughly 3,000 word chapter, I'm glad to see the author decided to go back, rewrite the chapter, and apparently split it up. This should help the pacing, and give us a bit more time to digest each chapter on its own, to get a better feel for stuff happening in-story.
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No wonder I was having a big ass sense of Déjà vu, this shit good.