• Published 27th Mar 2017
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Of Bats and Sparrows - Silver Inkwell



Follow along with two stories, one in the past as a guard struggles to be accepted into society, and in the present where a mare still struggles to do the same.

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Eighteen

Present Day

“That was really lacking on detail.”

“Well maybe he just doesn't like sharing details.”

“Well, he’s writing this to himself.”

“Okay, fair point, but still…”

“No, it’s still nothing, why not tat least try to describe it?”

“Would you want to describe every small detail of your life?”

He was silent for a moment, “Okay then, fair point.”

“That’s exactly what I thought, he may seem to skip around a lot, but who knows, detail might come in later, now then, let’s see what else he has to say…”

Comments ( 7 )

8056598
Check again, now I have.
(Give me time, please, geez.)

8056602
Mr. Foxhelm, this is bordering on rude.
I don't want to block you from commenting on my stories if you can't try to say something positive.
But I will if I need to.

8056606 I will still follow you over all. But I am not following this story any long. I should not have had to state it in the first place. I am not angry. I am disappointed.

8056598
Well, I came up with my own name, no thanks to you.
Ha-ha.

ten more chapters... are Alice and Ash going to body swap? That would be awkward, in the extreme.

Comment posted by Tropical Applejack deleted Mar 28th, 2017
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