Nightmare Moon survives the Elements' power and takes Twilight as her prisoner. Now, the alicorn queen must establish her monarchy and defend her rightful place as queen against those that oppose her.
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Commence read.
Glad to see an update.
Plus it looks like Lecture Mode is on for Twilight.
Scratched?
Sees update.
Has this reaction:
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I will now proceed to read!
I literally got to 44, and it just updated.
2223965 Yup! I noticed
Peppy.
Come here, Peppy. -Hug-
Thanks a lot for the update. I loved it. I can't wait to read Twi's adventure. I might have a few ideas what might happen but I prefer to wait and be surprised :D
I wonder how badly Twi's gonna botch the mission up. I mean Will the Dragons ally with the equestrians or just go on a homicidal rampage on the griffins? Anyway Moonlight sex is good sex, I can't wait till moonie decides to take Twi's member inside her.
This chapter should be called Parting Gift
Typo alert! Red letters and words are letters and words that the actual chapter needs to have added, while bold words need to be changed in certain ways.
The bold words don't seem to fit into this sentence at all.
Well, those are all the typos I could find. Stand by for my thoughts about the chapter itself!
Damn, that clop scene was HOT!!!
So their first stop is in Ponyville, huh? Perhaps either on the way to Drakenfidge or on the way back, you could have something happen that would allow Twilight to show Applejack that Twilight still wants to be Applejack's friend?
And Moon Beam...what can I say? She's our favorite Cutie who can turn into an Eldritch Abomination with power equal to Nightmare Moon's if her friends and family are ever in danger! I can't help going, "Dawww!" whenever she turns on her cute filly charm!
A great chapter, and I am looking forwadt to the next one! Here, have some badges!
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Also:
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I was hopping for a 10k words chapter( without the 4000 words clopscene),
but I'm still so glad for any chapters.
2224353 Fixed em, thank ye!
2224295 Hehe. Such a heavy gift it was, too.
2224180 Who said she was gonna botch it? Who said she wasn't? Who knows? Not me, that's for certain.
2224172 Not gonna happen! Not gonna go down the Twilicorn route. She's plenty fine how she is
2224152 Hee hee.... I didn't catch some of the words you were trying to use on my first reading .
The stormcloud doesn't reach too far out, about a quarter way out from Mareland to Ponyville. Ponyville will be interesting though. So far, the only one that we've seen accept Twilight, albeit pretty reluctantly, was Rarity. It's hard for a filly to grow up in a place like Mareland too, especially with the crazy that goes on in there. Plus, she really likes Moonie.
2224407 Wellp, there won't be any clop for a while, so that'll be fun! (like until the end, a while).
2224397 FJ doesn't work for image posting like this. As for the rest? We'll see.
Has Tyra seen Moonie go one-winged angel yet? I can't remember but if she hasn't that should be hilarious when the time comes.
2224542 Not yet Oh the joy that will be had.
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We are all friend here, so please call me by my first name "insolent"
Only had one problem with the chapter.
It ended...
2224449 on top of that I have a sinking suspicion that Twilight is already immortal due to somewhat binding her soul to nightmares. other than that I want to see Moonie pull the same thing to one of the villagers that she pulled when her and Twilight first met.
I've just spent the last four hours reading this from the start - in fact, the only reason I'm stopping is to go to bed!
I'm only on chapter 19, but I have to say Peppy, this is by far one of the most gripping fics I've ever read. The way that you actually have Nightmare breaking Twilight (and forcing her into what is nothing short of a strict BD relationship) is fantastic. In stories with similar premises, there's usually a glimmer of defiance, or a steely, hidden resolve in the lone captive, but so far, I've seen nothing of that. Twilight's harsh, humiliating treatment, her complete and total submission and her eventual descent into love have in all honesty, elicited one of the strongest literary emotional reactions I have ever felt.
I haven't been this influenced by a pony fic since Fallout: Equestria or, more recently, Asylum (I assumed you've read FoE too, since you seem to like the sidefics ). Seriously - even Dolores Umbridge didn't raise my hackles as much as Twilight willingly calling herself Nightmare's "pet"!
So to sum up: thanks for the awesome story, and by God, keep up the good work!
2225448 I shall! Tis definitely something I enjoy, so you can expect this to go to the end and beyond~ Thanks for enjoying it
Joke title: Heavy Burdens, Heavier Loads
2225550 That shall be the title until I find a new one!
2225998 Aha! Thank ye. One of the few words that pisses me off
No word from Space? Oh well, nice clop Peppy, as always. Not sure if Twilight is pregos but I guess I'll just have to wait and see. And what happened to the other Peppy? The one that updated back to back?
2226389 He died in a fiery plane crash.
'Twilight’s heady musk filled her nostrils, intoxicating her with the sheer strength of her arousal, but each ‘breath’ the alicorn inhaled carried the slightest trace of something else as well, something alien to the familiarity of her lifemate, yet strangely familiar to the long-lived queen. Something... magical.... Powerful....'
Anyone for a cup of Sparkle Juice??
2227089 Sounds good to me! I can't start my day without a cup o' Sparkle.
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She is. Peppy confirmed it at least twice.
2224727 2227614 Yup. As long as Nightmare doesn't die or as long as she isn't killed by unnatural forces.
Why I have a feeling, what all these hints about pregnancy just trolling and we will soon see some crazy twist?
Sadly, when I looked under my chair there was no sex.
2228493 Hmmm.... I guess just thinking I'm Oprah doesn't actually make me Oprah....
Peppy are u holdin out on me??? I looked in the fridge and all my sparkle juice was gone!
2230350 Pffft! That's cause I drank it, silly.
I know what next sketch will be.... :D thx Peppy for an awesomely funny idea!!!
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more moonlight ftw
2239794 I wish I had the money to commission something from kev. Still waiting on my commission from ecmajor though.
2239815 agreed
Peppy, oh Peppy, I find it so wonderful that you're still writing more, even though the updates come a lot slower than at the beginning. However, most Twilight Moon fics I've read so far have died the eternal hiatus death, and so I'm very happy for After That Fateful Night. Thank you.
I actually have a suggestion. Maybe you can make a recap chapter at some point, telling what has happened so far. It could, for example, be in the form of Twilight or Nightmare moon telling the story to someone else. Usually when I watch a show or the likes I absolutely hate those, because they only tell you what happened in about 2 hours, spread over not even 3 months. But this story has been going for half a year now, I think. And There are many details I don't remember. It would be nice to have all that summarized in a few thousand words. I don't know if that's asked too much, but I'd be very happy about it.
2244147 That would be.... hard for me. I suck at summarizing and shit like that I can try at some point, but it's really tough.
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Yeah, I know what you mean. If most parts of the story are still fresh in your mind, maybe you can just retell them the way you remember, from the view of Twilight or Nightmare for example.
2252039 Can't please everyone. You're also faaaaaaaaaaaaaaar back into the early stages of the story, though.
2245484
Maybe make it a blog post?
In any case, another awesome chappie, Peppy (I keep wanting to call you Pepito for some reason. My Hispanic heritage maybe?). Xaldon had a good question that wasn't answered; maybe you'll answer it now? Will Nightmare reciprocate the favor to Twilight, and take her futa peen? Being the control freak she is, that would likely show remarkable trust and love for her favorite unicorn. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
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Scritchies is a perfectly cromulent word. It means the same thing, but is used only in reference to cute things.
2253671 Okay then.
2253785 Huh. Can't believe I didn't notice you mention that. But yeah, Wrabbit's got it.
2253671 Not sure. Just depends on how I feel. The biggest thing is that bit during her final fight with Celestia. Lazer through the womb and all. With Twilight being the size she is now, she'd bottom out and that would be sensitive. I can always ignore that, or use it for feels, but we'll hafta see.
hey peppy why you not on skype anymore keep up the great work on this story
Finally update, it took far to long for it to come out.
Finally I will see some action, how sad that I need to wait very long for another update, because now Twilight will finally reunite with some of her friends, and about friends, I wonder do RainbowDash is still in training camp ad where is Fluttershy, do they will be in Ponyvile ?
2275043 Rainbow is still in training, Fluttershy is in Stalliongrad or something like that. AJ, Rare, and Pinkie are still in Ponyville though. Oh, and Spike too, I guess....
Updates come only as fast as I can write and that happens only when I can focus.
Wonder how long it'll be before AJ tries to beat Twi to a bloody pulp....AJ seemed pretty unhappy with her.
EDIT: Dunno if anyone's mentioned this yet, but I think Twi is totally pregnant
2310653 Vacation, I've heard.
2312909 That's a crazy boner. You should get that checked out