Nightmare Moon survives the Elements' power and takes Twilight as her prisoner. Now, the alicorn queen must establish her monarchy and defend her rightful place as queen against those that oppose her.
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For those of you that read the new chapter before I finished uploading the second and din't want the clop:
SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY
Got distracted by games and forgot to upload the sfw one first. Enjoy anyways.
YES UPDATE!
also...
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that is all
429007
s'okay I moved the comment
AAAAHHH UPDATE! Finally!
So many thanks! omigosh omigosh omigosh omigosh omigosh omigosh!
*squee*
429041 ?
429062
429074 Fokin D and C being right next to each other.
429093
429097 Good chapter! haha
429102 Thankee!
That last twilight/NMM scene is still hilarious in both versions... "bucking horn halters"... lol
429134 I figured you guys would enjoy that.
429184 Know what she should have done? Walked in there, slapped them on the ass and used that strap-on on both of em!
YUS! Finally another Update!
Heavy is pleased.
429326 Sounds like somepony needs to get over to Necro Domina and read that as well. (I alternate between the two unless, for some reason, I feel like writing two chapters back to back.)
429333 Heavy already read first chapter on Necro Domina, But he will see what this story is all about, Thank you.
I am tired from long day of killing BLU team and reading ponies. Goodnight everybrony
429341 Show them blues who's boss! I suggest you read it as it will link with this into this story's sequel.
UPDATE! WOOOOOOO! *explodes*
429357 Don't do that! If you explode, you'll die and then you won't be able to read my story and then I'll be short 1 page view EVERY CHAPTER! The world would end.
Dont worry. My special talent is the ability to explode multiple times, usualy from extreme rage, without any ill effects.
You dont want to see cutie mark. It's not pretty
Awsome chapter, so much happened but...Wall, later sleep now.
429377 That sounds moderately badflank. (hehe get it? Bad flank? I'm so punny.)
429381
Dont make me get the tire iron
429389 Oh Celestia~ Whatever shall I do~? I am but a poor defenseless writer not at all excited by being beaten for making bad puns~
yay update
great chapter peppy thoguh you did make us wait long enogh for it
can not wait for the next updates so keep it up
429464 Hehe, you gaiz have GOT to start reading ND if you aren't (also, this would have been out yesterday had I realized my editors were done with it)
429468
Im planning on reading it once ATFN is done.
Also, just how 'functional' could that 'attatchment' be made to be, hmm?
429610 Sounds like somepony needs to read the clop version~
429608 As splained above, the reason my releases take so long is because i alternate chapters between stories. I wanna get ND caught up to where this is (and ends) so I can get started on the sequel as soon as they're finished. Also, given another chapter or two, the pacing will pick up in this to progress the plot. I'm sure that if I took this day-by-day I could have well over 756324875629835623486 words, but honestly, that'd just be beating a dead pony with an ugly stick.
429478 Glad you N'Joy'd it
429616
Maybe it's just my weird way of thinking but I see ND as sort of the spin-off series while this one is between seasons, while the sequel is in the works. But that's probably just me. Dont worry, I'll end up reading them both.
429625 It is technically a spin-off somewhat, but it ties directly in with this as far as the world and its correlation with the sequel goes.
429678
Yes, but see, I read it afterwards, so i can go "Ah, so this happens while that's going on in the other story." or "Oh, so now that scene in the other story makes sense cause of this!"
And Im just weird like that
yay update you know what this calls for?
a party!!!!!
meanwhile...
celestia somehow escapes her prison, warps to nightmare moon and twilight and then proceeds to have a good time with both of them! and by good time you know what i mean right? eh twilunestia ... stay frothy my friend.
bo schit their sisters dangit thats just wrong.
not if they are immortals they definately had enough time to lust after one another
and i'll stop befor someone kills me.
anyway damn shit just hit the fan at cloudsdail central. 'hay command we needs back up asap'
...
'celestia damnit!'
429854 Twimoolestia is certainly a good basis for a clopfic. Maybe I'll write a one shot or something sometime
429895 No problem! I try not to mix you guys' drugs together. Can't be goin around accidentally killin you guys off.
430092 (I should totally write a side clop chapter with a pair of foals. Of the Moon and Cherry variety. Maybe.)
430159
Nah, I just think they're unbearably adorable together.
Like Twilight/Celestia, it's just the extreme adorableness that gets the gears in my perverse mind working...
430208 They are! I wish I could rip them from this story and just squeeze them till my arms break. So cute.
430211
Yeah verily.
Also... 'Bucking Horn Halter'.
....NIGHTMARE MOON GOT COCK-BLOCK'D!!!!!
430214 YUP (that was Twi that said that though)
430216
OK, I'm gonna say this right now.
This is extremely close in tone to my intended tone for my [published] KriegsMaiden series.
It's very dark, gritty, and scary. But it's made lovable instead of horrifiv by the sheer tsunami of adorableness and comedy, all while keeping an epic 'Lord of the Rings' type of feeling too it.
It is, in honesty, EXACTLY the story i like.
430222 Honestly, this is how all stories should be written. Dark and sexy, but adorable and funny when necessary so that everything balances out.
430228
Agreed. Now go write moar!
Hold on this "Necro Domina" You speak of... is it necromancy... or necrophilia?
430228
Seconded with vinyl.
430244 Necrofoalia HAH! Lol I jk. It's necromancy. But srsly, Dazzle and Blossom
430242>>430245 Fine, masters. Let me just whip up my * breaks horn*..... George Takei: Oh my.... WELLP NO MORE WRITING FOR PEPPY.
wow way to plug ND peppy, i'da thought most people would've read it by now.
Well at least people who follow you would've. Anyways took awhile but nice chapter peppy, please don't make a habit of long downtimes? I mean granted you can never be as bad as some fics i know when it comes to updates, but still.
wait.... if Lyra said that she and Bon-bon had planned on getting foals with some "magic help".....
why do I have the feeling something like that may happen with NMM and Twilight if they both survive everything that is shot at them
430255
*whistles, calling up Knightmare Sol* Sol! Healing spell 56902! Magical appendage repair: Unicorn Horns!
*A massive flaming Alicorn crashes down with the force of a meteor*
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"You called, my Rider?"
...yeah. You really gotta work on toning down the epic entrances....
"Not likely, sweetheart."
430282 Well, it's important to the sequel, soooo.......... And yeah, after all the shameless shoving of the story you'd think that it'd have been read 456857629825 times by now
430283 suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/14422537/images/1301538817799.jpg Whatever do you mean? *whistles innocently*
430290 OH HOLY SHI-! *is squished under Knightmare hooves*
430296
Hopefully it doesen't end tieing together with Dazzle or NMM dieing, although know you it probably will...
no offense to you of course but you are know to have some trollish cliff hangers and stuff. Not to mention twilight almost died from a freaking stab wound, and tart pretty much broke Moonie's heart last chapter. So anyways, how much longer are both of these so i have an idea of when they'll end up meeting.
430301
.... Get off of him.
Knightmare Sol: *looks down* ....oops. *steps off and lifts peppy off the ground* Sorry....
She looks and acts tough, but Sol's a sweetheart at the core....
Sol: Err....hon, mind NOT killing my reputation while we're here?
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Ok, jokes aside. I do read clop but my mind just pictures this as completely "dry".
Not that it is bad, it is good writing but once my mind sees something in a certain way, it stays like that and I would have trouble imagining it otherwise (it creates a lot of awkward situations, I can tell you).
And during the scene, my mind was like "They are now dry! Don't you dare think it otherwise!" and it ruined it for me.
430296
an innocent whistle? ah dam, I was wrong..... lol....
still it's your story, I'm just pointing out stuff that may (coughmorethanlikelycough) happen
still enjoying the story btw