Nightmare Moon survives the Elements' power and takes Twilight as her prisoner. Now, the alicorn queen must establish her monarchy and defend her rightful place as queen against those that oppose her.
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Er, you might want to fix the broken bold tag. The entire text is in bold.
4273157 Mother fucker.
4273157 Fixed. Couldn't fucking tell I was missing the / because of the dark theme I have on.
Damn, the shit's getting real. Poor Rainbow Dash...
And who is this voice that Twilight's hearing?
Griffons confirmed for pseudo-egyptian culture?
Also, guessing it now that twilight is more or less having an out of body experience, and that my earlier assumption Nightie is hallucinating is wrong.
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Sorry, but I don't agree with that opinion.
I'd almost guess it was nightmare. But Celestia is a possibility though an incredibly slim one. Might be the reaper come a calling given Twilight missed her first train ride to the afterlife. Really we don't know for sure but the shade/memory/hallucination that's keeping Nightmare company has be thinking it's Nightmare.
What I want to know is what Gilda caught onto that has her spooked like she is. lot's of military family members or not I admit to not having much knowledge or tactics. So while it could be she's trying to just make up for lost time there's also the issue of a second wave of troops coming through their current position and medical camps are hard enough to defend with trained motivated troops much less demotivated undertrained pacifists as the bulk of Nightmare's drafty army seems to be.
Ohh, why do I get the feeling some "noble sacrifice" is planned for Queen Moon.
We're going to see Celestia? I... there are a few ways that could turn out. Most of them are pretty shitty.
4273450 We shall see.
4273687 Something like that. More like, when I was thinking up what they consider to be their gods, I wanted something short and the only god with any bird-like qualities I could think of was Horus at the time. The dragon's god is Ouroboros and the ponies, mistakenly, worship Celestia as theirs. The basilisks (that are now all dead save for Dazzle's best bud) god was Death.
And, oh no, Nightmare was sure as sugar having some crazy hallucinations.
4273717 Shhhhh. People don't like it when you expand upon characters.
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4274203 Because nothing would make me happier than to see all of you guys writhe in anger and frustration?
4274342 We certainly are, but not yet.
4273955 Spooked? Watchu talkin about Arnold? But yeah, any moderate force could probably wipe the floor with these fools. Silly ponies and their lack of wartime training. Grow a pair.
4274406 Wow, not sure why I thought you'd actually build a nice culture with the griffons there, not like you've done that from about mid fic to now...with ANY race....
Also the reply to both the Celestia comment and the sacrifice comment scare me... I can actually see you sacrificing black queen so white queen may take the field with gusto... also suddenly I think in chess metaphors!
4274619 Not sure if sarcasm or....
4274670 Yea, one of the flaws of the internet that, inability to transfer sarcasm well... but yea, you kind of did create a culture for the minotaurs. Not sure how deep you described it besides maybe some facts about their trade, seeing as I've read that a time ago, but the information was there
4274798 Ah. Well, the griffons shall come. Most information you get about them will be from Gilda and what she says, but there will be bits of Griffonia shown.
4274406 Something about gilda's tone makes me think this is about more then catching up with the main forces. As for the ponies growing a pair, there seem to be spells that allow for such given Twilight and Nightmare's fun times but that's not quite what you meant. It's kinda hard for them to grow a pair when their "Godess" was not only protecting them but was seemingly overly reluctant to even have a military given how readily she relies on appeasement.
As for the whole chess metaphor thing. I'm now thinking of Through the Looking Glass.(The book not the quarter baked Burtin movie masquerading as it's predecessor.) Twilight is Alice, or possibly the red king, Celestia's the White Queen and Nightmare is the Red Queen and that's as far as I'd thought it out but meh.
4274829 True that. Celestia's a great ruler, but fear of loss is a great motivator to avoid conflict.
Yay not dead.
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I know that. An event that big can't happen too quickly because that would be the nice thing to do! Instead it is all suspense and story building. It's like being a masochist. We go through with the pain because it makes it better.
4275101 Not yet.
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Do you mean this kinda gusto?
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4274406 It doesn't anger me, plus there's still a chance it won't happen. It's just rather painful to develop an attachment to a character, only for them to get killed off in the end.
4275320 I'm honestly not sure what you're supposed to mean by that...also I totally expected a code geass picture.
I'm so happy to see an update to this.
So Twilight is pretty much unconscious. Although it be cool to know why. Maybe it's the weird poison's side effects. I'm kind of curious to know who the voice belongs to. It can't be Moon Beam because she's under Tyra's care for now.
So about Luna's hallucination of Twilight....is Luna going crazy with remorse and despair?Because for a hallucination she's pretty much disagreeing with a lot. Or is Twilight communicating with Luna directly due to their soul link?
Luna does care for Twilight right? Or does she still consider her to be an expendable slave? Since her vivid visions of Twilight pretty much reflect the way she treated her I guess it could make sense. Or does Twilight still think in her heart that she's Luna's slave and servant?
I really hope Rainbow Dash is ok. I hope that she still has her wings intact.
I hope we see a next chapter. Because I want to see what happened to Celestia.(It was actually one of the biggest questions this story raised.)
4275632 The picture is broken, because that site doesn't allow hotlinking, I think.
4275635 We'll just hafta wait and see, eh?
4275597 I'm sure it would anger many, though. Which would be great. I feed off of your tears. It is my sustenance.
4275597 protip, never read game of thrones
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You say that like this isn't the GoT of ponies.
4275910 I've read things that've killed more characters than you've done as of yet. I want to say the Lines and Webs 'verse has the monopoly on this shit, but god if I can remember some of the ways people die in that series. The most I remember are bombs and being hit by whatever the fuck Celestia uses as magic in the series...
Also, the author has killed Twilight 7 or so times already? So you're lagging boy, I think I might even hate that author more than you, and that says a lot.
(just kidding peps I love you and hope you continue writing this feels fest )
4276006 Except that, were I to kill Twilight, or anybody else for that matter, they'd stay dead.
I'll let everybody stew on that one for a while.
4276046 bullshit, Twilight already died and didn't stay dead.
4276119 That was required for the plot and a demonstration fo Nightmare's devotion. She can't always be there for her.
sometime the solution is found with a little bit of....chaos!
4276561 Nope. No Discord.
1-YAY! You're back!
2-This is fantastic! Completely worth the wait.
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So the link is broken, huh? Well I'm too lazy to re-upload it. The picture was of Tom from One Piece exclaiming, "Gusto!".
4276969 A man is a man because he try....and sometime fail....horribly....with blood and broken ankle
Well this chapter's name is pretty appropriate. I thought that Peppy's mood to write and release a chapter may never be found.
Good to see that NM is still hallucinating about Twilight I don't know why, but when I see her break down it just feels right. I'm not sadistic or anything, but I guess where at the beginning she had barely outwardly shown any emotions seeing her break down like that makes me wanna hug her and tell her that Twilight's gonna be fine.
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You use that word. I do not think it means what you think it means....
FORESHADOWING
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*Overly sarcastic accent* Of course she'll be fine!!! *wink*
Thanks for the hint Peppy!
4306557 Everything. You should be ashamed of yourself.
4306654 Look who's fucking writing!?
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4317959 :-).
Yay for dark souls keeping me occupied till the update, yay for update back to dark souls
4321154 Speaking of Dark Souls, I just ran into my first cheater about thirty minutes ago.
4321157 console or pc? If pc, I hear cheaters/modders ruined the crap of pvp...
4321165 PC. Had some guy take 0 damage from my Great Clup +10, it flattened him, several of the little midgits in the Belfry, a Dark Spirit, and DS NPC. All of them hit him several times, even staggering him as well.
4321171 cheaters like that take any and all the fun out of pvping. Sad really. Worse I have to deal will on console is lag....the countless I've been hit without getting hit, heck some guy teleport-backstabbed me.
4321179 I've been backstabbed and the guy didn't even teleport. One moment I was running away, the guy standing on the complete opposite end of the bastille, the next I was doing the jig like I got poked in the butt. And he was still running his happy ass around miles away.
4321185 lol. Honestly, pvping in the souls series has always been a....somewhat disliked feature at times. Not saying I'm terrible, simply so many ways to exploit the game whether it's spamming op spells, lag, or worse on pc, modders.
4321188 A lot of modders do so for fun textures, or increased difficulty. It's the cuntwads that do it to cheat the game that ruin it.