Nightmare Moon survives the Elements' power and takes Twilight as her prisoner. Now, the alicorn queen must establish her monarchy and defend her rightful place as queen against those that oppose her.
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YEEEEEES!!!! Update. gracious god.
First.... and What the HAY is happening here tonight. A hole lot of new updates for my favorite stories, a side story for Past Sins and now this... I must have died and come in heaven
Huzzah! New chapter! It's been so long peppy!
...YESYESYESYESYESYESYES
Good chapter Peppy, been awhile since you updated. I was beginning to lose hope...
Anyway, glad to see you updated, Jahurl is like a minotaur version of Pinkie Pie, except he is also a good leader. More training too , keep at it Twilight, you can do it. I hope to see the Pony/Minotaur allaince kick some serious Griffin ass the next chapter Peppy ^_^. Also feel free to use Tick Tock and the gang in any upcoming chapters, I can't find the drive to use the chars/write in third person as well as I could anymore. Gotten too used to writing from a first person, POV these days.
I almost creamed my pants when I saw this was updated. Seriously, my trousers almost needed changing.
You must learn discipline young grasshoppers...
When I saw that this story updated, I almost had a heart attack from happiness
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close anyways
1386484 I know, I know. I am a gracious lord. Sorry it took so long. Games rule my life, after all.
1386487 We're too good for heaven. This, my good sir, is Nirvana.
1386491 Read the notes. Been playing tons of FF11.
1386521 1386567 I tried my hardest to get it out. Was gonna be longer, and therefore take longer, but I liked where it ended.
1386581 No need to lose hope. Ever. I will write until the day I die. Which will be never.
1386586 Careful there. At least keep it off the couch. I just had it cleaned.
1386591 Hmmm.... Almost? I must try harder.
yay a update
another good chapter but its time to get your lazy flank back to writing more
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees!
oh hey, this finally updated!
So whats the final consensus on the clop and non clop chapters? I don't think that was ever announced?
I would offer you my spare Planetside 2 beta key, but I want to see the next chapter in my lifetime.
Yes! update... aw but no flop... ow well. Great chapter.
1386652 Yes please.
not sure if i asked before but is shining armor and cadence going to be in this
1386884 I'm pretty sure I've referenced SA and maybe Cadance, idr, but not this one specifically.
AWWW YEAH!
thanks you so much for this update, even if it's a small one :3
1386981 Would be longer, but that ending.
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG AN UPDATE!!!!!!!
That feeling when you have to wait for another chapter of your favorite fic
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ATFN Update
THANK THE GODS
1387028 FF11 is amazing. So much better than WoW could ever hope to be.
Yay
That is all
OMG!!!!!!! FINALLY!! I've been waiting for what seems like an eternity but it was SOOOOO WORTH IT!!! I love where this chapter is going, Pep! This chapter was awesome! Please! Oh, by the stars! PLEASE!!! Keep up the awesome work!!!
Beuno
YESYESYESYESYESYESYES!
I gotta ask.....Isn't child pornography illegal? Foals are children too. After reading the last chapter.....I just had to ask.
1388213 I just have to ask, are these things real? No? Then it doesn't matter. Plus, like I give a fuck about what the law says. I'm not hurting anybody or anything.
On to the next question, did ya like it?
1388232 I liked how you describe the sex scene, since I still cannot get the images out of my head. Did you past Nightmare Night? I try to keep track of your calendar, but it gets repetitive after a while. I thought you might do something special since it is a holiday for Nightmare.
1388248 Nightmare Night doesn't exist. Also, there's a date on each thing and I have a blog post on my user-page showing the months and whatever. Most of the months are similar to ours, just altered a tidbit.
From now on, I'm the only one that's allowed to go three months without updates!
Nah, I'm just being an ass dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png
I'll read this before bed tonight. Then, it's back to more writing. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
Maybe if I feed your literary addiction, you'll feed mine dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
Finally the update i have been waiting for
1388461 Needs more Sweetie Belle. And sexing Sweetie Belle.
1388471 This is not the update you were waiting for.
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I'm so happy there's an update. I'm actually kind of scared that Nightmare might loose Twilight. I don't wanna see her go in a rampage again.
I kind of wanted to see what happened in the night of Luna's banishment.
Also was Twilight becoming a bit flirty with Jahurl? Then again she is Nightmare's lover/sex slave.
For a short chapter it was really good. I also noticed that Nightmare's promise to protect Twilight is similar to the one in the chapter "A Second Coming" where Nightmare promised Twi that they will protect Moonbeam and help her if she gets hurt. Is there like a foreshadowing I should expect?
Anyway I await the next chapter. Just don't take too long alright?
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Peppy! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_gasp.png
How could you think that I would forget to sex up Sweetie? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png
I thought you knew me better than that.. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_sad.png
YES!
1389154 Just saying it needs more. Lots more.
1389077 Perhaps, but there definitely wasn't any flirting on Twi's part. And you'll get to see.It'll be coming real soon.
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Sorry. You'll just have to make due with some Analjack for now
1389390 Analjack is nice. That's like, a combination of two amazing things. Anal and Applejack.
Update!!!
Praise Queen Moon!
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Damn you I get it next time
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Tribulatory distress or suffering resulting from oppression or persecution; also : a trying experience <the trials and tribulations of starting a new business>
This is a good week first some news I'll gush about later and an update? I'm going to have to start looking for karma to bitchslap me.
Noone cares about my news though, what the people want is a typo riddled rant and I SALL DEVILER!
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A fairly short chapter but I'd say it was still sweet all the same.
We get a bit of the breakdown for the information that Tabitha gave us, along with a good look at how war room meetings will be held and who will be in attendance providing no real surprises show up. Got to love How tyro just spouted off an accuastion that was both accurete to a degree but also rather thoughtless overall. Nightmare's justification or no he does have a point as even Cloudy's backstory hints to raising problems with the gryphons years before the return of Nightmare Moon and the civil war the followed her and is to a degree even now mustinger for a possible resergance should the gryphon fail to take the nation as I doubt that the Celestial gaurd reminets will ever rest as long as there are any alive.
Our favoret minotuar king continues to proove to be the Scottsmen of this world (Shut up I miss Samuria Jack) a capable warrior and leader in his own right with a boisturious attitude that you can't help but love. His manner of deal with Scoop should proove to be quite intresting as things develope. I also find his statement on war bringing the ponies and Minotaur together to be intresting as while they may develope better relations and increase trade that doesn't mean that the two peoples will come together and stay together. This could easily trn into a temporary boon for them both and relations could cool down after the war ends.
I agree that the dramatic bits were well done. most espcialy that Twilight is forcing Nightmare to accepte the fact that she can die and that her queen can't possibly always be there to protect her. In addition to the mentioning how Nightmare is still struggling with the wounds left from her isolation and her still settliling emotinal turmiols are also a good point. The fact that Twilight seems aware that she's something of both an emotinal crucht and a morality chain for her beloved queen is also an idea worth exploring.
One of my favoret bits was durring the training as Twilight points out that not only do old habbit take immence effort to break especialy those that are so throughly ingrained and under such rushed circmstances. She also brings up a point that sometimes gets forgotten in fiction in geniral and fanfic in particular that knowlege and practice are diffrent things entirely. It's easy to say that just because you read up on a subject like say military tactics and study famus battles of the past that you've got a parctical knowledge of it. Another example would be teaching yourself swordmenship via reading old manuels about it and working from what illistrations and information they provide. When really all you have is a theoretical knowledge and as such you're really little more then a slightly informed amiture.
Don't get me wrong I want Twilight's plans to lead to a turn in the tides f the war in favore of Equestria and it's allies but knowing how evil Peppy likes to be and that there's no drama or excitement in a long unbroken reversal of a war even if it turns out to be a relitivly short war I'm not expecting things to go according to Twilight's plan even if we don't know the full details of it.
That aside got to love how Nightmare and Cloudy are going about whipping Gilda and twilight into shape respectivly. The dreamlike simulation bit with the actuale pain being felt is an intresting trick to use for such a vital training reginmen especialy given that the solders of Equestria and her allies are in a real time crunch here. More power to Nightmare's spell of VR simulation.
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With all that said great chapter Peppy and I look forward to more soon!
Now for the news noone give a damn about my nephew is doing great and best of all I've got a part time job now so Woo!
1391752 nice. grats on the job.
Thanks