Nightmare Moon survives the Elements' power and takes Twilight as her prisoner. Now, the alicorn queen must establish her monarchy and defend her rightful place as queen against those that oppose her.
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Hey, look at that shiny brand new chapter, it's so damn pretty!
woo!
I bet 1000 bits that twilight is pregnant.
Alright. Commence read.
Twilights pregnant. I don't now why I say that I just feel that she is. Its always the same exact way everytime someone finds out.. the Morning Sickness.
1794417 Well, it looks like Nightmare Moon got Twilight pregnant. This means Moon Beam can expect to be getting a sister!
And we get to finally see *sunglasses* another Dash of Rainbow! YEAHHH!!! About bucking time!
Can't wait to see what new you'll put in the next chapter!
Edit: Just realized that Twilight's pregnancy provides us with an excellent reason for her to see Fluttershy soon!
Edit 2: Chapter 36 had this line:
I was wondering when that Chekhov's Gun would fire!
She's pregnant. Be expected. Eager to see Luna`s reaction on news.
P.S. Author, you antichrist. You pervert the nature of things and justifies harmful to society relations. Are not you ashamed?
The plot thickens! Or so the saying goes
And hello to Spacecowboy! *grumbles about not getting spoilers* I never get anything nifty X3
1794337 What is this strange thing you speak of? Shame? Sounds so foreign? Are you sure you're speaking Equestrian?
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Ah'll up th' ante anutha' grand n' a half.
Seriously to', Pepps; it's only been a week since she took th' plumb, so ta' say, i'fn ya' gunna go 'n make Twil start rearin', mayhasp it's a lil' too soon?
Yeah, morning sickness.
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Dude, it alicorns things. That's yet to be. After the birth of Twilight will come out not only a healthy alicorn (male i think) but gaggle of Zerglings that organize Zerg-rush in griffins lands.
1794391 Just for future reference, morning sickness can happen pretty quickly depending on the woman. My friend at work got hit with it (she realized what it was after she found out she was preggorz) a little over a week/two weeks into it (approximately).
1794405 Also for future reference: I would never create a male OC alicorn, nor would I be like likely to create a female OC alicorn as I am a firm believer that there are only two (three if you count NMM/Luna separately) true alicorns in existence.
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Hey. Now I'm not sure. I respect you for your commitment to canon or blamed for cowardice to create something new?
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Ah couldn't imagin'! Th' betta' half didn't start gettin' acquainted wit' the porcelain throne til' bout a couple fortnights aft'a th' fact. Tho, rest assured if'n Ah really wanted ta' nitpick at ya' Ah'd bring up that horses dun' tend to have mornin' sickness, 'nd usually don't show it till 'bout a season or two, sinc' rearin' usually lasts few weeks short of a year.
1794439 If I was a coward for avoiding creating something new, this story would have 0 OCs (plus male OC alicorns are not new by any means and a plague upon our beautiful Equestria), the war wouldn't have happened, and Moon Beam wouldn't be the adorable destructive machine she is.
1794443 Yeah. Peppy is well aware of the workings of equine physiology (gotta study up on this stuff if you wanna stick as close to equine terms as you can, after all.) and pregnancy is something I'll likely touch on in a lotta my fics 'cause, honestly, who doesn't love a pregnant mare/woman?
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I believe the saying goes along the lines of "I know something that you don't know..." Queue the evil grin!
Really fun watching Pep type this up and brainstorm with him, gotta love this story.
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Pep kinda hates Male OCs. Bring on the female ones all day, cause Moonie and Cloud are fucking awesome in their own rights. And don't think you'll be seeing any Alicorns come popping out of Twilight anytime soon, too cliche to have a swarm of Alicorn foals to solve very problem that crops up.
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Peps, ol' sport; ya' dun' know til' ya gotta' yank a lil' thing from blossom of a cantankerous motha' who ain't quite ready ta' get it outa her. Ah'd offa ya this much, how-ev-er; ahem, fanfic depictions of pony sex and pregnancies are far better than the real thing, If I can only offer you one piece of knowledge that I have accrued, do not work as a farm hand, and I imagine that goes double do to your fetishization of this material. Horses suck. Horse sex sucks. Horse Rearing sucks. Horse shit sucks. I have been a a member of a certain fandom that champions the anthropomorphized animals for well over ten years now and I still cannot find horses in the least bit attractive. But Ah don't think ya' need to worry 'bout that.
Needless ta' say, good chapta as always; albeit a lil' lighthearted, but Ah dun' think Ah care that much. Lookin' forward to the next installment as always!
1794581 Yeah, I hate horses irl. They're so ugly. So damn ugly and I've had to live with horses before, but I've luckily never been an active part of the rearing and such. I sympathize with you though considering the videos I've had to look up to figure all this stuff out. The foaling and such is so nasty, but luckily nopony has to deal with that in fanfiction! Unless they want to. Then they're just weird.
pregnancy wat a bitch!
Aww fuck.
I would've never guess she was pregnant if I hadn't read the comments.
Damn, that would've make such a nice surprise. Damn you, spoilers!
@Peppy, I'm still trying to make that drawing! Gotta hold on my promises, but my IRL schedule is not helping; didn't had the chance to start yet.
Prego Twi, callin it now!
Peppy doesn't like Male OCs? Huh guess it's just dumb luck that rule about roleplaying killed off those half assed side stories I used to write.
Anywho update must ramble.
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A bit less intense then the last chapter but I think we needed the breather anyway especialy if Peppy's got a big twist planned for the near future of the fic cliff hangers are bad enough but cliff hangers after sevral highly dramatic chapters like the proceeding one? That's just evil nothing that hasn't happened before in this fic but still evil.
I like many others think Twilight however is pregnet. However I had another guess namely that someone was slipping her some kind of posin in her food. It seemed fairly probible given the sheer number of spies, and assasin that seem to be able to just walk through the front door of Castle Mareland with a resime in muzzle. Though the doctor seems to have ruled out posin for now I'm not going to dismiss the possicbility out of hand untill the story itself confirms that Twilight has a bun in the oven.
nice job teasing us about Celestia, a few answeres here but plenty more questions came up as well. For example how 'Nicely" did Luna ask about the night being extended by a few hours and just exactly how diffrent is the Celestia that we know from the show and the one from Luna's flashback here? While it's true that she could have changed greatly from ruling on her own for a millina that doesn't mean that her personality was radicaly diffrent then the show provides us with. Also love how we get within words of finding out Celestia's location before Twilight's sickness hits. I wonder if we'll ever find out how completely that spell effected Moonbeam. Twilight isn't going to rush into opening old wounds but I'm sure she still wishes to know so erhaps in the sequal story then.
Dash at training was intresting, a bit of development of her and a few others namely Spitfire and Dizzy. I'm not surprised that Dash is a troublemaker here she does seem to be the kind that wouldn't work well in the military too much of a free spirt and let's be honest here too lazy as well. That's why I was startled to learn that she was being considdered for a officer's commission. Revoed or not I don't know if she'd be able to work in that position at all. while a loyal friend I also think she's too impulciv and hot blooded to be a leader especialy in a combat situation.
Combine that with her dropping her gaurd so easily, and her little berzerker episode and I'm not even sure if she'd be good for combat at all. Put her on scouting missions and the like but not combat, she's not ready for it right now. Even the show itself shows this in dragonshy she kicked a literal sleeping gaint in the face with no real plan other then to yell at him. It's really only dumb luck that kept her and the others from being made into greasy smears on stone after that. Add in the Mare do well insodent and we see how much her pride and jeliousy can affect her judgement. However I think with time and a LOT of hard work you could knock some sense into her but a week? Not a chance really the only way she's going to learn how to reighn herself in is for her attitude to get either herself, or a friend hurt or posscibly killed and given that she's about to be flung out into a war... yeah er next time in combat could go very wrong very fast.
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Great chapter Peppy and co! Nice to have you on board Spacecowboy. I'll admit being envious of the spoilers you know but I won't hold it aganst you.
kikikikikikiki
intresting new emoticons
but no luna one yet damn
Totally not Preggers Twilight going on here! It will be good for laughs when/if Celestia ever finds out though, lots of yelling about bloodline sullying and all...
1795158 There's certainly no rush seeing as how you're doing it of your own free will.... Unless you notice the gun I have held to your head, but the chances of that are slim.
1795637 I technically don't like male ponies period, but anyhoof.... Can't really comment on much as it's getting close to the end and I don't wanna spoil anything.
1795974 Don't want to spoil or just preferr to tease us?
1796099 Can't it be both?
1796116 Knowing you? Probibly, still if you don't mind me asking why arn't you fond of male ponies?
1796129 I just don't like em cause generally, when they are used, they're shipped with females. Especially male OC's, Big Mac, Braeburn, and Time Turner. I loathe them with a fiery passion.
I'm so happy a new chapter appeared. Thank you Peppy!
I finished reading it the moment it appeared and It was really good. I really like how passive Luna was with Twilight. She answered some of her questions, she was very tolerant(Maybe even supportive) of Twilight's feelings for Celestia and she was aware of her own screw ups in the past when Twilight was still her slave(She still is and it makes the pairing so much better).
I believe that Twilight is pregnant. I mean she and Luna mated like crazy. Maybe Luna might be shocked, surprised and or happy. I mean Luna will have a child of her own and he/she might follow her "evil-ish" legacy or might become Moonie and Cherry Tart's new friend. I bet Pinkie will be on a field day If she finds out. I'd like to see her baby sit Twilight's new foal.
But since reading Chapter ??? A Second Coming I think Twilight will have a miscarriage. Maybe through natural causes or for some other reason.(Which I bet it has to do with the Griffon War). I guess that would explain why in that chapter Twi and Luna became crazy with sex. They want another foal.
Peppy you really have the ability to make me feel sad.
I hope you update faster than usual. Also I hope it has more drama, war and your *ahem* "tasty" clop. I hope we get more of your *sad sigh*....futa ponies. I kind of want to see Twilight getting Nightmare pregnant.
P.S Speaking of evil that Celestia and Luna had to banish....does it have to do with Morla the Necromancer from Necro Domina?
I have nothing against Twilight and Luna's foal, but why now?! Poor Twi.
After all, what she went through and continues, you added a pregnancy (or you just trolling us all).
1796202 I can understand that don't nessicarly agree with hating them because of it but I can see how annoying that can be.
i like this new peppy, we should keep him! seriously though; good job with the chapter all three of you!
great chapter! i wonder what's wrong with twilight, she might be pregnant (certainly seems that way), but i feel like that's something which a doctor would spot.
1796316 You forget, Peppy makes sure not to give us spoilers when he writes chapter like that. I mean, in the Hearth's Warming Eve chapter, he deliberately made sure we didn't know about Twilight's changes.
Besides, the chapter you're referencing takes place so soon, I find it doubtful that a filly conceived at the time Nightmare Moon got Twilight pregnant would be able to talk, let alone keep up with Moon Beam.
1796701 Not if it hasn't even been a month since conception, which I don't think it has been.
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well, admittedly; i don't know much about the subject, so that might very well be the case.
1796809 , that's most likely to be the case.
1796762>>1796809 Well, Peppy knows all about it cause pregnancy is sexy!
1796832 Excellent. So should I assume Fluttershy will be playing a more important role in the future?
1796853 Perhaps, but will it be in the way you expect, or something else?
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Ooooh that explains the odd feeling I kept getting while I was working on my car a few minutes ago !
I'm pretty much free right now, unless some major fic releases an update while I'm writing these words. I could try right now :D
1796905 Well, I expect that Fluttershy and Nurse Tenderheart are going to be trusted to make sure that Twilight's pregnancy doesn't have any complications.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png
Of course, knowing you, I could be WAY off with my guess.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
Also, it's nice that we finally got to see another *sunglasses* Dash of Rainbow! YEAHHH!!!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
1796316 Dude, this was my reaction to your P.S.:
Remember Discord?
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I know. Moonie is way to hyper. She's almost like Pinkie Pie without the 4th wall cartoon antics.
Wait...I thought that chapter was non canon. Or maybe Peppy was trolling us.........as usual.
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Oh yeah. Sorry for the goof.
I can't believe I forgot about Discord's imprisonment.
1797157 Author's notes for chapter 19 say:
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
Besides, you referenced another chapter that, going by your logic, would also be non canon.
1797157 I take it that you haven't responded to my comment yet because you can't come up with a counterargument?