Nightmare Moon survives the Elements' power and takes Twilight as her prisoner. Now, the alicorn queen must establish her monarchy and defend her rightful place as queen against those that oppose her.
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! UPDATE!
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i shall now proceed with reading it.
699928 I had to reset my computer right in the middle of adding that one so I had to start over, but it's up now.
699951
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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Dat re-feature box is so OP.
Yes! Oh god yes! An update!
My day is now complete.
Thanks. Thank you so much.
I wonder what will happen with Twilight over the next few months... Will our - oh so adorable Moonbeam have a little brother/sister soon?
One more question, a little bit more serious.
When do you plan release the next chapter?
700274 Couldn't tell ya as I have no idea myself.
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Oh, okay. Better wait a little bit longer and have nicer chapters than update too fast and be stuck with a too fast-paced story!
That, was a quick answer.
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Everything.
I liked everything about this chapter.
All of it.
*also nice getting featured...........................again?*
You know.... I just noticed this.....
"Not yet, Moonie. Fillies and colts aren't born that quickly. Don't worry, we'll tell you when we decide to have a foal. It's a big decision that needs to be made by the whole family."
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*has sex w/ luna*
*luna finishes inside on a whim*
*luna uses her favor and tells her to leave it inside (because she can)*
Just sayin.
Hmmm... This is, magnificent...
I fucking approve!
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Please keep up the great work! (Although... What happened with them talking about what she made Twi do? I was, honestly, expecting a LITTLE more conversation about it, but...)
YaaaaaaaaaaaaaY!!!
Finally! But do you have any idea how long have been waiting for this chapter where I thought the Rarity scene would be!!!
Well since you post your last one so... yeah you do... anyway you get my drift.
You'd better have the Rarity seen in the next chapter!!! Or... Or... Or I will send you angry PM's!!! The horror!!!
I wonder what rarity will think of twilights new brand... maybe twilight should get some tattoos just to mix things up...
700334 It'll come. Urges tend to overcome conversation. Especially sexual urges. And imminent battles tends to push stuff back as well.
700482 There is no greater power than the swinging dong of an all-powerful alicorn. Bow before her might or be crushed by the doomhammer.
700622 That'll go nicely. Maybe a few piercings to just to throw her off even more.
Luna is full-on lesbian? I always thought that with such a long lifespan, Celestia and Luna would eventually find attraction to both genders.
Hmm I smell an update, that means I need to get to work. Also I'm going to have to suspend my side story as i think it would break the no RPing in the comments rule. Shame too I had an interesting bittersweat end it mind for it.
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Well we get the long awaited for reaction to Moon Beam discovering the big news. I'm fairly sure that sevral servants and guards alike died from her blood sugar spiking joy as she tore about the castle, they will be missed. However Twilight brings up an intresting angle on the way that Moon Beam and Cherry Tart inner act. I don't know how deep thier slowly building friendship runs but as we saw a few chapters yet things are still somewhat strained for the two of the for various reasons.
I wonder how well adjusted Moon beam and Cherry Tart will end up being. Aside from the traumas they've already been through untill the war is over more should be expected. Hell even then I wouldn't put it out of the picture given how Nightmare's image is with the public at the moment and probaly won't change for quite some time. Granted I'm sure that assaination attempts will decrease after the war but I doubt they'll drop off completely.
Something else I'm pondering is why is Twilight still growing? I had figured that she would have stopped by now especaily given that her magic has returned to her. Yet this doesn't seem to be the case as she apprently picked up a few inches on the way back fro Valutra. Is she going to keep growing utill she matches Nightmare Moon in size?
The emotinal ripple affects of Twilight's branding and the events that lead up to it are still being felt it seems. Not only is the brand a visible reminder of a rather rocky moment in thier relationship is also seems to have drawn them closer to each other afterword even though things will continue to be akward between them for quite some time yet.
The information that Tabitha provided is intresting. it seems that Cloudsdale has found a nice hidey hole for the time being if the griffons haven't been able to re locate it. Still I wonder if the griffon's don't have some kind of trick or allie up thier sleeve given the way thier tropp placements were being discribed. I smell something fishy about all of this.
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701271 She finds the male gender disgusting. While she tolerates them as servants and work ponies, she has absolutely no interest in them outside of that. Peons for her entertainment. You must also remember that, until recently, she lived in ancient Equestria. Back then, (which you will not likely see as it isn't as important to the story at this point) the ponies didn't have as many laws and such back then. Less laws = more depravity and, unlike the modern times of Equestria, the males were more dominant in society despite the sisters' rule. Just like in human society, when men are dominant, they tend to become pigs. Sad, but true and, unlike Celestia, Luna hadn't liked em from the start.
701802 Oh.
Well that's a shame...
700856 Fair enough! *Waits happily*
701854 Not only that, but I hate seeing mane characters hipped with males. Fluttershy/AJ I can tolerate, even if I don't like it, but it rubs me wrong to see Twi/RBD/Rarity(even though I see her as bi)/Pinkie/Celestia(better be with Twi or Luna)/Luna+Nightmare shipped with anything other than mares. Trixie and Gilda too. OC's? Ship them straight or lesb or gay whatever. BG ponies? I have a select few that I love certain ways, but the rest can be whatever too. Mess with my Mane ponies? I'll cut ya
So now Twi's gettin pregnant
Going to be fun when they realize what Luna ACTUALLY caused with that favor
702084 That's pretty specific. Male ponies just not very good? I love those Lunar Guards, though!
I prefer to think of near-universal bisexuality for pretty much all the characters, especially the princesses for having been around for having been alive as long as they have.
i wonder if celestia is waching all of this? that would be kinda acward also i wonder if if she is watching is she getting aroused by twi and moonies relationship? if so then nmm realy is mean leaving the poor mare without a way to releave herself.
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Unless she does not for some reason, such as Peppy declaring that ponies need to be in heat to have a foal.
703347 ye, but that's just no fun. Making Twi think that the spell couldn't be used for reproduction since it is made of magic (wich could be the reason why she ain't worried) is more fun IMHO
(clears throat) SQUEEEEEEEEEE
Hohohold the fuck up....MISS fancy pants?
704254 Wait wat? Lemme go read that. I swear it should be smarty pants
Edit: Yeah it's totally Smartypants. I was like, wtf? I know I wrote Smartypants the first time I wrote that part. I swear if I got it wrong when rewriting it I'd milk my face with my fist.
Oh wait never mind. Just you know mind raped myself there for a bit
704314 Hey! That's my job! You guys' mind vaginas belong to my brain penis!
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Haha jokes on you bro, I have a big old brain penis
[daduq did I just say?]
704342 That's fine. My brain penis swings both ways! There is no safe haven for brains or minds when my brain penis is involved! *mad cackling*
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Oh god everybody run now!
Our only hope is mind chastity belts. Quick women and children first
peppy you evil bastard! Put your mind Wang on a leash
[Oh god I know I should be disgusted by the talk of mind monkey polls raping other minds...but it's just so funny ]
704502 There is no stopping it! It's become too powerful! [You're right. Well, somewhat right. I rarely get disturbed by anything, but its so much fun either way]
704740 TECHNICALLY all the other chapters were clop free. This was, literally, clop-lite.
704967 I know right? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
Peppy's into mind rape now? I thought he just liked to suspend us over cliff edges in caged made of bubble gum and and peppermint sticks.
Meh what ever my brain hates me anyway I've cut back on the bolthouse so it's been throwing a hissy.
707367 Don't worry. My brain will whip it back into shape... in more ways than one.
You're welcome to try but really I doubt you'll get any results.
I was born one comment ago.
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you don't say xD. And rape/mutulation is the only thing that disturbs me that I can think of
708459 I think I top off at shit fetish. I can fap to almost anything, but gay/shit fetish porn. Gore? Rape? Mutilation? Come at me bro! Add a little bit of poo? Do not want.
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Oh god that's actually something I've never encountered.
Shit fetish? How do people fap to shit? that ain't right
But yeah I don't like mutilation cause it reminds me of past experiences and rape is just well....not right
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Have you ever seen Two Girls, One Cup? Yeah, that's some crazy gross shit (literally) there.
~{AFTER-THOUGHT}~
But as gross as it was, I didn't find it that disturbed.
~{AFTER-AFTER-THOUGHT}~
But I'm the most jaded bastard any of you will ever have the pleasure of meeting.
709952 I thought it was funny. Couldn't fap to it, but still funny. I know I'd never willing look for scat though.
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Mhmm yes I have. I like to respress it honestly
That and tub girl.
But do people actually fap to that? Wow I thought it was just the Internet being internet
714366 Oh no. That is most certainly a fetish that people get off to. I remember being in anger management in-patient therapy and there was this one kid that constantly got in trouble for keeping shit in his pockets and fapping with it. Totally nasty.
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I learned two things there. You've been to anger management
And you've seen some much nastier things than I.
probably just where you live
714868 I was wrongly placed in anger management. Tis a funny story. Some asshat at the community center where I used to live decided it would be funny to pick on me because I'm quite geeky. Big weeaboo back then, fyi (still am but ponies = #1) He followed me around, taunting me, and pushing me and, after he knocked me to the ground one time, I had had enough. Found the biggest, sturdiest stick I could find and beat his face in. Bam anger management. Cause I was totally in the wrong.
The weird shit? Tis what happens when you start going to websites like rotten and such before you even hit puberty. Fun stuff
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I just dot get the whole being picked on thing. I just gave anybody the bash who was too cocky or q dickhead. Nobody fucks with the person who smashes them I spose
And sticks are great for smashing faces :D
I never got anger management. If anything it'd make people more angry
714909 It did. It was so pointless. Tried to teach empathy. Didn't work. It's amazing how easily you can fool people, especially therapists, by just saying what they want to hear even if you've never done, felt, or believed it. It always made me laugh to think that, in the year I had been in AM, others had been there for 4+ years.
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people believe what they wanna hear. Hardly ever believing the truth
Peoples are silly
And pretty easy to manipulate