• Member Since 28th Dec, 2016
  • offline last seen Jan 15th, 2020

AJtheRaven


Appledash shipper. Critical of everything. Except Appledash. Because Appledash.

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It's a business trip. Nothing more.
But Rainbow Dash doesn't seem to think so.
Applejack and Rarity are going to Manehatten for the weekend. And no matter how many times AJ promises Dash that she's just going to promote the farm, Rainbow keeps insisting that Applejack is secretly going on a fashion trip. Naturally, Applejack is very much unamused. But she's going to get her revenge...


(Part two of my Valentine's Day posts. Here's part one. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/364283/all-i-wanted)

Also, not my cover art.

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Comments ( 8 )

This needs a sequel, just to see what Dash's reaction will be.

Hiya! I feel like you captured each ponies' personality perfectly. All in all this was a great story! Keep up the good work! It's four in the morning and I can't sleep! Yay! ~:derpyderp2:

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Hey, not a bad idea. ;)

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Awww thanks! I hope so! Now go get some sleep ;)

sequel!!!!! please!!!!!

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Mmmmmm... perhaps. ;)

This totally needs a sequel! It's downright cruel to end a story on a cliffhanger like that! Well done story, everyone sounded in-character and the situation leant itself to some good comedy. You might want to tone down AJ's accent a bit, it was a bit overbearing at times. Overall, great work! Now write that sequel! I must know what happens next!

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Thanks!! You know, I've had sequel requests from a few people, so I might just write one. ;) I got a few others I want to write first though, before I forget them. Thanks for the advice about applejack's accent. Also thanks soooooo much for the follow! You won't regret it;)

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