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I'm just a random zebur that just so happened to have passed by here... where am I exactly?

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Here's to a dozen more chapters! :derpytongue2:

7933990 I couldn't do it without you! Thank you for helping me as I tried to write horse words.

Only a dozen?

Well, maybe only a dozen... depends on how big it gets.

Also, you have cover art, that's awesome.

Congratulations on publishing! :twilightsmile:

Looks good. Good luck going down the road!

The story certainly has come a long way from the original draft you showed me! Great job, Zebs, and can't wait to see how the tale continues!

It's nice to see a FoE story that isn't littered with typos from the get go. Kudos to you there, sir! I know the pain of trying to write a Fallout crossover and putting your heart and soul into the tale, only to get unexplained hate and downvotes for it. Hence, I hope that my thumb up can help your story achieve what you want it to.

Looks interesting, and i kinda like how we get a protagonist who is more on the "dark side" of things... and a zebra :twilightsmile:

There really is not enough zebras in this fandom :coolphoto:

Great start; I'm excited for where this can go!

Wonder why she did not mention the alicorns ?:applejackunsure:

Probably because that would require admitting that the town wasn't completely deserted when she got there.

This. Would of been a dead give away.

Yeah i thougth that too, but if Tomb actually expects three grunts, a trigger happy griffin and our MC to pick a fight with a bunch of alicorns and whoever else among the townsfolk that has a gun or explosive, then he is not very smart :ajbemused:

(I mean really who in their right minds would pick a fight with alicorn's with no military train... oh hey there's a toaster repair pony, nevermind) :pinkiecrazy:

In all seriousness though, it would only have costed Tomb five of his bandits, one of which was his top enforcer, and it would give others the belief that it is possible to resist him and the Gravestones :facehoof:

So not attacking them was both strategically and morally the right move :moustache:

well...that was a way to start.
nice =D

Damn good story so far! Keep writting. :pinkiehappy:

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

Comment posted by TheWanderingZebra deleted Nov 27th, 2017

Gin Hammond would be voicing Phisa, and Minty Fresh would probably be voiced by Jenny Nicholson.

Damn what the fuck is Minty?:rainbowhuh:
Great chapter! Write moar! :pinkiehappy:

Minty is a mare in mint condition!~
And thanks! I'll keep working on it.

Heya! Sorry it took me so long to read this and give some feedback. I enjoyed what I read, and I particularly like how you handled Tomb's introduction. The protagonist is a bit... hard to like, which is understandable with a raider/bandit/gang character, but I feel she needs a more explicit personal code of morality to be more endearing. Thanks again!

Good chapter! I like it. :twilightsmile:

I hope you come back to this soon, I'm really enjoying what you have so far! :pinkiehappy:

The next chapter is still being worked on, I'm just a bit slow. But I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far!

The picture...It reminds me of the time i underestimated a super mutant and ended up stepping into a nuclear landmine...
That embarrassment though

Isn't here a little too much plots and shemes in this town? :trixieshiftright:
Good chapter!:twilightsmile:

inb4 it turns out that there are even MOAR schemes and plots behind the scenes.

I really enjoy what you have so far, your characters have a lot of strong traits, Minty and Phisa have a good back and forth. Minty is a little all over the place and not just oppressively positive like I was hoping she was but still neat. Looking forward to more!

Finally got to reading this thing. All in all... not bad. The protag is... well, a little hollow feeling. Like, she has flesh, but I feel like her bones aren't all there. I don't know if that makes sense or not, but that's how I feel. I'll keep on reading, though -- you have caught my attention.

In a weird way, it does make sense to me.

Phisa reminds me that most folks in wasteland don't becomes 30lvl machines of death despite living whole life of shooting and fighting. That's good. :twilightsmile:

How did you come up with the main OC's names?

Of the main cast? Or every single character that as thus far appeared?

Crap, you said main. I was tried when I typed that. But yeah, there is a fun story in regards to Phisa's name.

Phisa's name was pretty much taken from the game Vampire the Masquerade - Bloodlines from a character named Pisha. At that time years ago I thought "damn, Pisha would make for a fun zebra's name". But I mis-remembered how the name was spelled, and by the time I realized this, the spelling I had for Phisa just stuck.

Minty's name was just me thinking 'what would be the happiest sounding name that feels original' and that was how I came up with the name.

Vandal's name also came from a character from VTM - Bloodlines. They share no other similarities whatsoever however (the same in Phisa's case). The name just sounded cool for a griffon to have.

That was pretty much my process in naming these guys.

Good chapter! I like that town is behind not so fond on crowded talky citygang plots. Adventures is best thing in foe. :twilightsmile:

Love it, can't wait for more!

Nice, new chapter so soon!

Love the new chapter, nice to see Phishy being nice for once... in her own way
You shouldn't call your editor names, like Weird, thats mean lol

Maybe a bit insane, LB

That's literally his name though :/. WeirdingtonEsq.

And glad you enjoyed the new chapter!

What about Vandal and the main villains?

Good chapters! I like character development and stuff. Also. Intermissions are good if they rare and short. Good stories don't need them. Only if you want to show characters which will not cross paths with main group for long time

Am I here to stay writing this you mean? Or?

Another great chapter! Can't wait for more!

Oh, Phisa building up her own gang damn fast! :pinkiehappy:
Again campfire is a good way to create adventure atmosphere.

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