• Member Since 10th Feb, 2016
  • offline last seen March 14th

Cadiefly


Writing is my passion and hobby. Join me and follow along for whimsical adventures both fun and sad, romantic and dark, and adventurous and quaint if that is your fancy.

E

Hello, this is the part where I, the narrator, would normally name myself to you, the reader, but I am afraid that such a label would be meaningless by comparison to the lighted-hearted satirical nature of this venture. If you feel the compunction to call me something, however, then you may dub me Mr. Whiskers.

For those of you interested in reading a tale of dramatic woe, I would caution you. This is not the story for you. While it is certainly true that Tim's narrative here begins in one of melancholy, being plucked from his home in some remote universe and transported to Equestria, his tale is anything but sad. Indeed, it is one of chaos.


Chapter 1 is proofread by PoisonClaw and princeps
Additional editing is done by TheDizzyDan
Artwork provided by Lome

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 21 )

8044199

As opposed to someone else's OC? Given the characteristics I gave him, I would like to think so. :twilightsmile:

Two comments, zero views.
Dafuk?

8044264

You have to give it time for the system to update. It's like this for new stories, I believe. :pinkiesmile:

Stopping in his activity, the hybrid said, "Really? You're mute? Oh, this is priceless!"

He's not mute, he's just a Nintendo protagonist.

8044271 Really? Because when I post new stories, they somehow have ten views before I click "publish" XD

8044292

Quite the accusation, my good friend. Love it! :rainbowlaugh:

8044294

I would speculate that it has something to do with the activity on the server. Sometimes it will immediately post a count, and other times it takes about thirty minutes, and some users seem to be able to see it before others. Not that it matters at any rate. I'm surprised I logged around a hundred views during the editing process of this story. :derpytongue2:

hold on, this is sorta based on a tv show which is based on a book but this has nothing to do with them?

mind blown.

8044709

It would be whacky to see the Beadelaires here to be sure, but it does indeed not relate to their tale of woe. I felt that a Lemony Snicket like narration would provide an interesting avenue of approach in handling some of the quirkiness in the displacement of charcters in Equestria. I found this way of telling this tale profoundly interesting, and I will definitely enjoy playing with Mr. Whisker's part in the story in later chapters. I hope this had been enjoyable. :twilightsmile:

8045114

In that case, I'll be looking forward to your feedback for when/if you get the chance to read it. :twilightsmile:

interesting wished you continued this story.

8961706

Sorry about that. This is one of my projects I was saddened to put down. I'm working to pick up all my projects again, hoping that I do not continue to disappoint people.

Well this story flowed much better then last time and there is an interesting build up, I wonder what Discord has in store for him and what will happen to the kid/colt if he is ever captured/hugged by the the Ponyville residence. Looking forward to the next one.

9093925

I've made a lot of improvements to my writing style over the past year, thanks to my writing specials. It's nice to know that I'm finally pulling away from the lawyer speak in my prose. :twilightsheepish:

Nice to see you back, writing is still good, keep it up.

Always like your whimsical writing, keep it up.

9430671

Thanks! :pinkiehappy: the tag has now been removed. I must have forgotten to do that before when I made adjustments to my plot. :rainbowlaugh: Although perhaps I should still tag Twilight since she's featured more heavily in the later chapters. Hm. What do you think?

Login or register to comment