Hearth's Warming Eve is a holiday to celebrate the coming together of the three great pony clans under a united pony nation through love. Everypony knows this story, recounted countless times by believers of the mythical ancient deities of Equestria to ward off their evil spirits.
But there is a more sinister and dark past to behold, one that is known to nopony alive today. What horror awaits us inside?
Inspired by stories on creepypasta. My first horror-ish fic I've ever done, but I'm confident that this will be something that I will be pleased with when I'm done with it. It's taken in the first person perspective if Silver Spoon.
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This is just like a creepypasta, it's got those feels, you know? If I could, I'd give this 9 out of 10 pumpkins (couple of grammar mistakes which I forgot the location of.)
But the plot was amazing, most MLP fimfics that have a horror tag aren't honestly that good. Nor do the characters act anything like themselves. One of the few ones that fit with the character's personalities is Cupcakes. But I never finished it or barely started, it was just too gruesome. But this had just the right amount of everything
Perfection of a MLP creepypasta right here! Definetly favoriting, upvoting and giving you a watch!
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Just like a creepypasta? Well that's good, considering that's what I was going for. Lol. And sometimes seems impossible to catch all of them. I must have read through it 8 or 9 times. Heh.
7812989 If you would like, I could beta for you sometimes. In my opinion, it's better to have multiple sets of eyes - more noticeable things. So just offering in case you'll want it. Plus, I've read a chapter of your DiamondBloom's Hangout story, and I could tell that you're an amazing author. I'd personally be glad to read your works multiple times
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Sure thing. I've been writing for most of my life, so I've had lots of experience. Might I interest you in my "Love Like a Diamond"? It's really good, from what I've been told.
I was a little worried about this particular work because it was the first one of this genre that I have done, so you might have been able to tell I was a little out of my comfort zone for this story.
Very interesting, though I think *technically* it isn't second person.
*shudder* Still as creepy and awesome as ever! Just wanted to reread some of the best stuff I have on my shelves and this was one of them. After just reading a dark story, I was in the mood for ANOTHER dark story! Horror, dark, same thing. Well, almost. It was still super awesome! I loved it just as much as before.