• Published 27th Dec 2016
  • 1,919 Views, 43 Comments

A Blueberry and Her Greenery - Gentian



Can love really blossom between Equestria's most infamous traveling magician, and a creature from another world?

Comments ( 19 )

Please enjoy.

I most certainly did.

You have offered a story's worth of words. I feel obliged to offer at least a few in return.

Thank you for sharing this story.
I appreciated this take on Trixie and her thoughts and feelings.
It had the same feel as when I first encountered "Xenophilia", myself. I think it's a fine homage and a fine story in its own right.
I will be watching for more writing from you, should you continue your work.

Great story I hope you write a sequel soon or later keep up the good work update more soon :twilightsmile:

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It had the same feel as when I first encountered "Xenophilia", myself. I think it's a fine homage and a fine story in its own right.

That's high praise indeed, thank you very much. It's nice to know people are enjoying it, particularly this take on Trixie. I think she's a very interesting pony, and am glad you liked her.

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Hoi palloi is a derogatory term for "common folk." I believe it's a Greek loanword, and sadly for the way it rolls off the tongue, gets very little use.

I meant mien, not mane. Mien sounds like "mean," and means (ha) "appearance," or "facade."

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Thank you! I have another story which needs writing, so there will likely be new content in the not too distant future; hopefully that will work for you.

fantastic and delightful. The characterization was amazingly paced despite it being such a short story. It was amazing I truly enjoyed it. thanks.

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Thanks, it's nice to know so many people like the story. I appreciate you taking the time to read, and comment on it.

7990236 it was written well enough that I had to comment. to not do so would be disrespectful to you as the author.

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Well, I don't know about all that, but thank you very much!

Really good story, love the way you wrote Trixie and the dialouge in general. Most stories involving Trixie and her travels post Alicorn-amulet takes the absurd route of making her life hellish, that everyone dislikes her and her life is ruined etc. It makes sense that atleast some ponies/creatures still finds her work entertaining and you described it, in my opinion, to near perfection.

Keep up the good work and I will patiently wait for more! :pinkiehappy:

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I agree, it does seem absurd for everypony to hate her, despite what she's done. It's established in "canon" that the amulet affects it's wearer's mind. Were Trixie human, or subject to human laws, this probably wouldn't get her off the hook, and the likely best case scenario is that she'd be in jail for a long time. But in Equestria? Nah, ponies don't behave like that.

Thank you, by the way.

A good story always deserves a re-read. Btw I had to remove my story an will be reposting soon.

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Why thank you! Why are you reposting your story?

I remember now why I faved this AMAZING story. <3 It's got everything I love in pony-fiction: great world-building, strong characterization, lovely emotions, and heartstring-pulling romance. And with Trixie, no less! It's a beautiful relationship between her and Anon, definitely one I'd love to see continued or expanded on. Thank you for writing it.

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Thank you very much! Despite it being my first story, I consider it my best, and I'm glad so many other people enjoy it, too. Last month, I reread it, and think it could be a little better. It moves along a lot more quickly than I realized. Maybe when I finish my current story, I'll revisit this one, who knows? Again, thank you.

Not bad at all. I'm a bit disappointed it didn't end on a NSFW note but was still lovely

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Thank you for reading, and letting me know you enjoyed it. There is a NSFW scene, the link is in the chapter note, or failing that, you can find it on the pastebin.

https://pastebin.com/hhUzPjZr

It's all the way at the end of the story so just scroll down. I hope you like that, too.

От части это похоже на Ксенофилию. Малой частью.

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