Spike Gives Rarity a Checkup

Spike gets a job as a doctor and gives Rarity a checkup.

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Kegimus

Kegimus #1 · Dec 29th, 2016 · · ·

It wasn't terrible, but I don't think it was much of a story. It was more like reading an unfinished episode script.

Derpy388

Derpy388 #2 · Dec 4th, 2020 · · ·

Aww even though I saw the E for everyone I was hoping for something per*****d. It's still a decent story. Upvote

Nebbie

Nebbie #3 · Oct 20th, 2022 · · ·

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I was expecting a rectal thermometer...instead I think the entire point of the fic is an excuse for a bit of tickling, which is one of the author's interests.

Also, a thermometer does not just say nothing, he should be noting her temperature, and he should also not be giving her a shot during a checkup...and I think you meant "hoof", not "arm".

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