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The Warmaster

Trying to keep up the motivation to write, and am trying to focus my attentions

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Caldoric
Caldoric #4 · Nov 28th, 2016 · · · Chapter One: Arrival of the Killer Prince ·
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Damn that Ahriman... Now he's displacing folks.

Also, I caught that Skyrim reference.

Nice story so far.

Battle154
Battle154 #5 · Dec 6th, 2016 · · · Chapter II: Ragnarok Day ·
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“Well, after it killed you, it jumped away from the town and back to wherever t came from.” Twilight said as she noticed some of the surviving townsponies running up to them. “Oh good, looks like just about everyone made it out okay.” She sighed in relief as they got closer. When they were a few feet away, she called out to them. “Hey, how many surviv-” she stopped mid sentence as two of the stallions shoved Zero to the ground, restraining him. “W-what are you doing?!” Twilight asked as some of the other mares started pulling her away, hatred boiling in their eyes as they stared at Zero.
“Hey, what's the big idea?!” Zero growled under the weight of one of the stallion earth ponies.
“Be quiet, demon! You thought you could slip into our ranks and kill us all when we weren't looking?!” The stallion growled, his green mane flowing down over his eyes. “We saw your true form, demon! We won't let you hurt our families any more!”
“STOOOP!” Twilight yelled, teleporting in front of the stallion and throwing him off with a levitation spell. “Just what do you think you ponies are doing?!”
The stallion got back up quickly, preparing to charge Zero again, until Twilight put herself inbetween them.
“That bastard’s a demon, Princess! He plans to kill us all!” One of the growing crowd yelled.
“I just saved your god damn village from a demon, you bastards!” Zero growled, getting back up. “If I wanted to kill you, I would have let that big old thing do it!”
“Cease your lies, demon!” A mare yelled in the back.
“ENOUGH!” Twilight yelled, earning everypony’s attention. “Zero saved you all from being destroyed twice. He has fought for you all, and I demand you release him at once!”
“But Princess-” One of the ponies started, but Twilight glared at her.
“No buts! If you want, you can charge him and we will finish this in a trial!” Twilight growled, taking Zero in her magic and teleporting the both of them away.

:pinkiecrazy: Never anger Princess Twilight Sparkle!

The Warmaster
The Warmaster #7 · Dec 6th, 2016 · · · Chapter II: Ragnarok Day ·
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7775491 actually, it's some of the survivors from Ponyville, plus some other survivors from other towns. It's not all Ponyville's fault

forrest yuchnitz
forrest yuchnitz #8 · Dec 7th, 2016 · · · Chapter II: Ragnarok Day ·
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A trial? Bullshit leave them to die that's what I'd do don't want my help then fine I won't help next time demons show up maybe apploosa will be more grateful

forrest yuchnitz
forrest yuchnitz #9 · Jan 13th, 2017 · · · Chapter III: Trial...Seriously? ·
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i still would have left them to their fates screw them

Titan Commander Sebaste
Titan Commander Sebaste #10 · Jan 13th, 2017 · · · Chapter III: Trial...Seriously? ·
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Hmmm.... I wonder if that was Tyrfing or another character... guess we'll see...

InfernoRage008
InfernoRage008 #11 · Apr 10th, 2017 · · · Chapter IV: Magic N' Stuff ·
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Well, shit. Hope Zero is ready and that Laevateinn knows what he's planning out.

InfernoRage008
InfernoRage008 #14 · Jul 6th, 2017 · · · Chapter V: Amane, the Killer Princess ·
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Ouch! What a bitch! It I wonder which is worse; getting your dick cut in half, or freezing your nuts off?

The Warmaster
The Warmaster #16 · Jul 6th, 2017 · · · Chapter V: Amane, the Killer Princess ·
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8279255


Don't worry, I want to kill him JUST as badly for his infernal puns

InfernoRage008
InfernoRage008 #18 · Aug 25th, 2017 · · · Chapter VI: The Blade Queen and Thunder Pigeon (Crossover) ·
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Christ, that was dodging as fuck. I'm a little conflicted about how Cassie and Zero treated each other, while they both had valid arguments, I'm not sure if either of them do have the right to judge another one's actions, if they don't fully understand one another. I'm just gonna leave them be.

Grizzly Nation
Grizzly Nation #20 · Aug 26th, 2017 · · · Chapter VI: The Blade Queen and Thunder Pigeon (Crossover) ·
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“The power of a Killer Prince… who's lost himself.” Amaze sighed

I think you meant Amane.

The Warmaster
The Warmaster #21 · Aug 26th, 2017 · · · Chapter VI: The Blade Queen and Thunder Pigeon (Crossover) ·
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8388288
Incorrect. As I told you, it's unlikely that Zero will ever respect her after that snide little comment. Plus, if he learns how badly he kicked her ass, he'll definitely have something to brag about if they ever meet.

shadowgod3211
shadowgod3211 #23 · Aug 26th, 2017 · · · Chapter VI: The Blade Queen and Thunder Pigeon (Crossover) ·
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8388294
hi there glizzy I'm surprise to see you here on my birthday :pinkiecrazy:

InfernoRage008
InfernoRage008 #26 · Sep 10th, 2017 · · · Chapter VII: Recovery and Training ·
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Don't think of it too much, Zero. Some things aren't worth figuring out.

InfernoRage008
InfernoRage008 #27 · Nov 29th, 2017 · · · Chapter VIII: The Heroes Of Ice and Fire ·
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Well...that explains the two new characters.

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