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The Warmaster


Trying to keep up the motivation to write, and am trying to focus my attentions

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Hmm. I had played Planetary Annihilation.

God I loved Total Annihilation back in the day. The premise alone is worth keeping track of this story for now.

It's plausible given how The Core Contingency ended..

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nuff said.
It's the predecessor of Planetary Annihilation, Supreme Commander, Supreme Commander Forged Alliance, and Ashes of the Singularity

7473298 O.O Wow. I didn't even know about this game. Is it good?

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Why yes! The economy system is good, and was used by the other games mentioned, the units were fun to use, the tactics could be hilarious in some cases, the graphics are pretty good considering it was made around 1997, the campaign was kickass, the music even more so, and lots of other fun things!

It's also on steam for five dollars, which includes all it's expansion packs

7473526 Woo another RTS displaced this one is going to my watch list

7472756 Oh? please, PM me your theory on this. I like all the feedbacks

7473526 I see. Are you might be planning to do a Supreme Commander Displaced?

7474588 Well possibly. Maybe maybe not. Though I think there is one somewhere. Granted.... They are Kinda broken. and have a very weird story

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/311239/equestrias-supreme-commander
that's it

Hmmm, fascinating that Equestria is using ARM technology, though that raises an interesting point. If I remember right, the ARM KBots were canonically manned by cloned pilots, have they been adapted for pony use or have they been reduced to AI control like the CORE KBots?

7475273 I believe in the canon it was the Arm Commanders that were piloted by human clones. But I may be wrong and you may be right. Either way none of the ponies have ever bothered to look, especially since they haven't used them for anything except training drones for the last three hundred years or so

i have the feeling 217-FCKU926 is leet for some thing.

good chapter but that last section was rather jumbled:derpyderp1:

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Shhh...it's meant to be confusing....:moustache:

Though if it looks like gibberish then there might be a problem:rainbowderp:

7568835 its not gibberish just really confusing.

7569218 good.
All will be explained in time, though I left some clues within the text.

:pinkiecrazy:

The Elements of Harmony just upgraded to the Defenders of Harmony i'll probably do this every chapter if I can. You have been warned anyways like this chapter keep up the good work.

first signs of changelings in chapter three

Halo Crossover forerunner tech And Prometheans!!!!!!! :pinkiecrazy: Imagine Composing Ponies into promethens!

Its about to get "Lit"

Memes live on forever.:moustache:

Three way war between Invictus, Ponies, and changlings ahead! I think....

Damn, did not see that twist of Equestria being Empyreean coming. The changelings have just made the stakes a lot higher though, if their little secret has anything close to what it did in The CORE Contingency. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

When I saw the ending I was thinking to my shelf, is that liberty prime from fallout? I know it's not but its the thought that counts.

Comment posted by The Warmaster deleted Oct 28th, 2016

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Well how did you think the ARM Commander got there? Crash landed on a random planet and got buried in the mountain?
Nah, Equestria was once Empyrrean, Last planet of the ARM. More will be revealed later, but this is a sort of alternate ending to the CORE Campaign.
I wonder how everyone will try to construct theories on how they both ended up defeated on Empyrrean....Oh wait shit

7473298 I will admit this story does sound like a good tragedy. It is a tragedy, right? It's going to end with Equestria destroyed?

Standing as tall as a skyscraper, the Atlas sat patiently on its four legs

*six

Yes, it has six legs

Oh, also, Bring in the Legion! Bring in the Legion! Bring in the Legion!

I can almost guarantee that the CORE commander would ally with Invictus. Bringing in a Legion commander, suggest as Cyclops, due to their primary directive being to annihilate the MLA, would give equestrian an ally with a fighting chance. I know Legion isn't canon to PA, but he'll if I care!

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Wait wa...
Let me go check.

Alright, I've looked up some images from in game, and I can confirm that it has four, unless you count it's arms.
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7676515 quite possibly. There are still parts I want to think out first, to see whether or not I want Equestria destroyed, or if I want certain...other aspects of things to appear. Since I still have a lot of chapters to do before I make that decision, I have lots of time to think up ideas for this story, or to better flesh out current ones.

But, in truth, Tragedy is only a tragedy from a certain point of view. For example, if Invictus destroys Equestria, it will be a tragedy for the Equestrians, while Invictus will feel satisfaction, right before finding something else to do, like attack the Griffons or the Crystal Empire/Kingdom. It all comes down to perspective

...I need to stop rambling

Edit: also, haven't seen that name in my comments section in an eternity. How's it been?

7676585 hmm.. I might consider it, if a bit tweaked a little...
Though while The CORE might want to ally with Invictus, it is highly unlikely Invictus will, unless forced into an alliance to deal with a greater foe. After all, his Primary Directive is to Annihilate all Other Commanders.

But it is a thought. I will definitely consider your possibilities

7676591 do you have the game? I've looked at the model, and it has its two big legs, and four, much smaller legs. It's hard to notice at first, but it is true.s3-eu-west-1.amazonaws.com/rcgs3/robot/1/2/9/9/c/1299c2f2535f0b29a3dabe68d770d.jpg
If you look closely, you can in fact see it has an extra set of legs. I play the game, and have looked at the model up close to confirm. I thought I was crazy too at first.

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Aaaahhh I see what you mean.

Oh well. I'll fix it in the morning.

Also, I have the game, just not Titans.

I got the game back during the kickstart, when you could glitch planets through each other and crash the game-and your computer.

Those were not good times

7676610 I suppose Invictus might think the CORE commander a member of the Synchronous...

7676626 cool.

Also, love the quick updates.

7676631 there's that, but he has been attacking Equestrian Guardsponies, which are set with a pony-fied version of a decoy commander with slight building capabilities.

Those don't look like any type of Commander from PA I've ever seen, so he essentially labels anything not him that is even somewhat similar to a Commander as "enemy".

So even if he mistook them for the Synchronous, he would kill them regardless. Plus, his memory files are corrupted, so he doesn't even know about the factions. His only orders are "Search and Destroy"

7676639 I work on about seven stories, so I do a chapter just about every week for each of them, unless something or the other occurs and delays my progress.

And I generally write my stories in a pattern, so I can tell which story I haven't updated yet.

It's a whacky, dysfunctional system, but it still works

7676648 it doesn't seems dysfunctional. Wacky, yes, but I definitely works.

i did not see the Empyreean twist now we just need the supreme commander ACUs to come and the ARM Commander to awaken

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